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Moments 9
Demolok
none of the 2 options
Demolok
work on grammar pls
Demolok
+1
Demolok
the story so far is good you just need to get the pronouns correct
Demolok
+1
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Fairy Tail: Tremor Man
Anime & Comics · UrizenVergil
Demolok
F/F + 1
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Morgan Le fay In Harry Potter
Anime & Comics · Noboru_senpai72
Demolok
not cool
Demolok
if you're gonna write an English story the n do that don't mix 2 languages it's a headache to read ..,......................................
you need to keep your timeline straight in the last chapter you wrote weeks of using the branch but in this one you write 1 week