RomanMarch

male LV 13

Fresh Author, looking to gain insight into the craft and improve my writing.

2018-09-07 เข้าร่วมแล้ว Global
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ป้าย 17

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RomanMarch
RomanMarch
1 years ago
Replied to Zenon00125

trash

RomanMarch
RomanMarch
1 years ago
Replied to PancakesWitch

I just copied your writing in the novel. Yikes, can't recognize your own work?

RomanMarch
RomanMarch
1 years ago
Replied to PancakesWitch

aww someone's feminity is threatened 🥲 Big girl nweed her bwinky?

RomanMarch
RomanMarch
RomanMarch
2 years ago
Replied to Forst_Lost

Coincidentally right after the free chapters end.

RomanMarch
RomanMarch
2 years ago
Replied to Error_BrOkEnCC

They wasted 50 chapters. Those first 50 are the most crucial for readers. Strong start but with large info dumps, not using the system, not setting a realistic goal or expectation, not having any kind of adversity through it.... The dude became OP without working for OP. Weak to strong is a hit and miss genre, you do it well or you don't..

RomanMarch
RomanMarch
2 years ago
Replied to Hateful_Fellow

you gave him a house, but you couldn't give him a spell... you act like you're not the one writing this

RomanMarch
RomanMarch
2 years ago
Commented

Just wanted you to personally read my feedback. deleted after. You're a great writer, and I'm personally a nobody with cash. I just gave you my opinion. You have dedication and talent. Thank You

RomanMarch
RomanMarch
2 years ago
Commented

I swore this book said no romance

RomanMarch
RomanMarch
2 years ago
Replied to PancakesWitch

Was reading this story but definitely dropping it now because of this comment.

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