nice chapter
Missing the details, feels more like a step to step explanation but it's okay I think.
Feels like a parody from Harry Potter's first year.
Thanks for the chapter.
Starts out good with new innovative ideas. Later on, author goes the usual rout with canon ... . For me the story goes downhill there, plus, with the change of the story it feels less than a One Piece story than a story about a guy with mental problems.
Story is good but kind of awkward with Danzo around and how MC behaves...
It's easy to understand, character is quite competent it seems.
Story itself would be good but I can only give 1 star to story development and stability of updates. Author is revising the story all the time and deletes chapters already out. As a reader you don't know whether you have to reread or not. Better be slow with the chapters than deleting stuff already out.
Nice and all but how would his father even know that those books are important for him?
Harry Potter: Death and Domain
Book&Literature · PathLiar