All hail the dark crow
[ Ding! Great Crow of Dark Mystery is looking at you with anticipation]
I Have Infinite Systems In The Immortal World
Eastern · starry8sword
In this remake are you going to add all the girls he had from the original arc bc overall in the original it felt really bloated bc he got to many girls from this arc. If you decide to be a 1 for 1 faithful remake that’s fine. I just think there’s a couple of girls from this arc that may not be needed.
Excited that someone in the community is doing a remake. Best of luck especially with cutting down the beginning arcs and fixing grammar mistakes. Overall excited for this remake and hopefully contuation of the story when it gets to that point. Good Luck 👍
I think you can just leave it as is but maybe make a comment about it in the future with updated info. Like saying that they didn’t actually know until they got to that level to see how destructive a being who increase there soul level really gets.
A level 2 soul from the beginning can be considered as super men by breaking their first physical limitation and since these people are stronger, the usefulness of firearms will decline immensely at this level, although they can't be considered immune to them yet. Here the individual begins to integrate a type of energy into his body to strengthen it.
Soul Evolution System: Reborn
Fantasy · Jwunder_99
I think you missed a chapter the jump between chapters doesn't flow well
Knowing whats to come in the future i think the description of soul levels should be updated bc a strong/peak soul 2 can definitely desimate a city let alone a hous
A level 2 soul from the beginning can be considered as super men by breaking their first physical limitation and since these people are stronger, the usefulness of firearms will decline immensely at this level, although they can't be considered immune to them yet. Here the individual begins to integrate a type of energy into his body to strengthen it.
Soul Evolution System: Reborn
Fantasy · Jwunder_99
Thank you for pick this up I enjoyed reading his story mistakes and all but knowing someone will have good editing and possible continuation of the story I wish you the best of luck🫡
Fix the grammar for the cultivation relams get confusing with the names
Fair if it’s not your strong suit just keep up the good work
There won't be a harem or romance element, and while there may be some crush of females, it won't be like other novels and won't be shown much.
Cultivation PC: I Became Stronger By Downloading and Installing Data
Eastern · EvilisMyNature
A stronger body is need to combat poison aka for her not to be positioned by her own pet her constitution (body) needs to get stronger
"The stronger a Pet Beast's poison, the stronger the Beast Trainer's constitution and poison resistance."
The King of Beast Trainers
Urban · Sounding Stream