Really good so far, keep it up. ...........................................................................................................................
Starts out well but starts going downhill after he finishes his training arc and starts to interact with the main cast. Quickly starts to bash the OG story characters and Shrek out of nowhere. Like MC has absolutely no reason or motive to be so aggressive to any of these characters but does so anyways. Paragraphs and sometimes even entire chapters are also sometimes out of place and jumbled up.
Damn disappointing that this fic has just devolved into shrek bashing for no reason at all, started out well. MC has absolutely no reason to be agro to any of these characters and noticed this trend ever since he was an AH to bei bei and tang ya out of nowhere. Oh well onto the next fic.
Interested to see the direction you take this
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Shifting Moon
Book&Literature · Malamber