After reading 200 chapters I finally feel that the author just doesn't know what he is doing and he doesn't have a clear future plan. First let's talk about MC. Although MC is interoduced as a lucky dog and the whole system business is also great Author reluctantly didn't improved MCs's strength for at least 100 chapters or so. I don't get it why MC needs to be weak. So for 100 or so chapters MC did nothing but host a big event. That event is also questionable cause I don't know the reason why the inn got so many popularity all of a sudden. On a second thought the story was great before that long event. Also I get it that MC is cautious but the outright mistakes he made although the author backed that up saying he has brain tumor.Anyway my whole point is if you are so reluctant to make the MC even fight why not make him a saitama type MC who is already super strong. That way we don't need to see MC is simping or things like this.
I love the idea but I feel like these stories needlessly make the MC weaker for no reason. MC should be someone very strong. That way it can even out these scenarios. I know it's my feelings and all author wants to give CH development to his MC but I think these settings doesn't partoicularly need weak MC.
It's like the cultivation stories always have an issue in the family. Either they are too evil or too mysterious or too chummy.
Like the bangle really ain't gonna give him any boosts. He is a innkeeper what he will gonna do owning a galaxy though
However, what attracted him most was the Bangle of Narn. Lex never imagined himself as someone who was greedy, but owning an entire galaxy and everything in it carried an irresistible temptation that wholly overwhelmed him. It was a kind of temptation that he had never understood before and honestly, if it weren't for the fact that the Bangle gave off an aura that could be sensed, he would have chosen it without hesitation.
The Innkeeper
Fantasy · lifesketcher
Velma? Seriously dude?
"Very well, you will be Gerard and you Velma," he spoke to the old man and young woman, respectively.
The Innkeeper
Fantasy · lifesketcher
Actually I also forgot why? It's probably dumb bimbo reason who has too much self righteousness installed in her mind.
"I will find you personally whoever you're and kill you after you destroy Sun Sect." Said Ruby in her mind with an evil laugh.
Martial World Simulator
Fantasy · Ehtimam
There are lots of twins.
The last day of their vacation was a predictably teary-eyed affair, with Mary finding every excuse to delay their departure until Nico was sure the escort driver was going to simply throw them in the car and flee.
Humanity's Greatest Mecha Warrior System
Sci-fi · Aoki_Aku
It is kind of forced but what he can do to change. I mean he was just a little baby at that time. Anyway maybe losing him will change her for good.
It is interesting so I am gonna try it. It has potential.
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original Martial World Simulator
Story is simple, an MC that doesn't fuck around. He's a chad, he's a sigma, he's a man, he's a legend. Wherever he goes he creates a legend. The word beta MC doesn't exists in his book. He's a king, he's a husband, he's a boyfriend, he's a best friend. To those he deems worthy of his friendship he values them but to those who is his enemy are always ends up in a bad state. No matter how good you are as an enemy, no matter how great of a villain you are in front of him you are nothing but dust. Before him the drama of a villain arc is nothing but pathetic crys of a baby who wants attention. Villain arc is never a thing cause he is the reason of every villain and heroes villain arc. He's a man with ambition, desire to rule the universe. And to us as a reader we are just bystander enjoying the show as he destroys and obliters kingdoms, countries, tribes, civilizations, races, and everything else that are on his path. He is Magnus the legend.73 Chs 180 คอลเลกชัน
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Living A Quiet Life In The Royal Academy
"My academy has princesses from all over the world. They are the apex predators in the academy. People call them 7 Princess of this Academy and do anything to make them happy. But in my eyes they are ugly. There's only one princess in this Academy who is worthy of all the phrases. If it's her I can even destroy the demon lord and bring his heart for her. She's the queen of my heart and my girlfriend. I will spend my lovey dovey quite life with her. What all the other 7 Princess are mad at me because I never looked at them? Why? Annoying....."4 Chs 9 คอลเลกชัน
Well for starters if you create a story about cultivation fantasy you do need to cultivate the Main Character instead of leaving him for at low level without making him cultivate and become stronger for most of the first 150 ish chapter. That's ridiculous and not necessary. You may call it character development to fancy a little bit but that is not character development but sloppy writing. What is the point of that organised tournament so early in the series?? It would've been so much fun if the MC is powerful but instead you just provide him with unnecessary materials that make him look weak.
The Innkeeper
Fantasy · lifesketcher