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in east continent the thing that you say will happen

pro have class for any situation

I don't saying that in the future you don't have interaction with your reader but just give a hint not the full picture of what you think so there can be many possibilities that can make the reading experience have unexpected situation of what they think and that what we call pro have class

And in the future chapter don't just admitted and respond of what you have planned and see your reader reaction and opinion of the said chapter And you can think of many road/possiblity from that like paradox or multiverse where you can become anything and the limit of this is your self

just make it original and interesting to read

just potential not the strength that he have right now but if he don't have any will to do the harsh training then he just like Gohan(Dragon ball) have so much potential than his father but pursuit another thing

is up to you right the almighty author And Add some betrayal in the future to make it interesting

just make it unexpected or complicated for this situation and add twist in every corner to make it interesting to read

timid kid with monstrous potential and have financial problems WOW classic but still interesting to read

classic but still interesting to read

you too can reconsider the pov(point of view)of another character that have anything to do with MC/or not but still related to the world that you want to create and will hindering the path of the mc in one or another way and make sure(this is your choice and this is just my opinion) create a character that OP besides MC so that when reaching the level of his grandparents he can still have a goals

one more think about the future about this is that when you decide to go with premium chapter maybe you can Start the premium chapter in the 100 after 1 Month you can alter it in 50 chapter if possible because the audience or reader that you have when you reach the 100 chapter will be a loot just maybe you can considering this when you reach that

I don't know why I write this but I think you have already a idea for this book but the amount of stress that you have in real life make your body/brain burnout so just in case don't overdoing it and relax something you can absent/ not to write this book around a day even a week and just focus with your body health and your college life and when you're already have time with refreshing body and mind you can write this book again because sometimes great can't be build/recognized in just a day or week it take time see you

just focus on the blood carnival first after that introduce the western, eastern force that need to be know in the game (Npc),the introduction/explanation about the world beauty and his dark side through the mc view the introduction about player that stay in the top ten,the opinion and the activity of the Behemoth guild on the good/bad side,The introduction about the god/demon the activity of the hidden group/individual,the hidden/disguise master or something along that line as for the real world just try introduction about the dark world that not everyone know and the one who know is someone who have a status and I don't know if you want to make the mc join a university or just take his grandparents job you can make the mc joint a fighting tournament in the real world so that not just in the game in the real world to so that he can be called a dark horse or just the sound the title of your book a force to be reckoned with and you can introduce a character in this way more better way because not everyone can have the VR because of some accident or financial or fear of something that have to do with VR game but still have skill or talent or potential that reaching a monstrous level

the father of him have space related thing and his aunt have time related thing maybe his grandparents of the father side still alive somewhere you know and reappear when things got to complicated to handle appear that Alex and his family can't do anything about it you know just a theory and thought of mine so don't make it complicated

his father side actually

ok then good luck with your work(novel) and we see how this play out in the future and stay healthy in both body and mind and see you in the future if you still doing this work(novel creator) and all the best for you and God bless you