PhantomMaou7

PhantomMaou7

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2018-08-07 เข้าร่วมแล้ว United Kingdom
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PhantomMaou7
PhantomMaou7
17 hours ago
Commented

Have to admit, thought of this scene when I read "White knight"

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Scimitar gave the man a nod and turned back to the group. "This information has been provided you for two reasons," he said. "First, for your sections to be vigilant of the employment of soul magics. However, they are not to be informed of why. Second, that Lord Potter is now a DoM Protectee... you know what that means... and he is not to be aware of that. That operation is also Deep Secret and is code named 'Knight's Shadow'. Lord Potter's codename is now 'White Knight'."

Harry Potter: The Witty Wizard

Harry Potter: The Witty Wizard

Movies · Miguelho

PhantomMaou7
PhantomMaou7
1 days ago
Commented

think it meant to be *now with a deadpan expression*

'Let's see how good Thor does,' Maxim thought, looking back to Loki and seeing that the Asgardian had regained his emotional control, not with a deadpan expression on his face as he sat quietly.

Marvel: Video Game Templates!

Marvel: Video Game Templates!

Movies · StrikerAuthor

PhantomMaou7
PhantomMaou7
4 days ago
Commented

*Ben not Emily

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PhantomMaou7
PhantomMaou7
5 days ago
Commented

this is a repeat, might want to remove the duplicated paragraph

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PhantomMaou7
PhantomMaou7
5 days ago
Commented

I thought Lucy works there, 2 days a week. Shouldn't they meet more often?

"Lucy! It's been too long," the woman spoke, her voice was light and friendly, as she approached to give Aidan's mom a quick hug, the voice belonged to a familiar red head that Aiden was confident he could recognize anywhere…..Jean Grey

Dragon Slayer In Marvel

Dragon Slayer In Marvel

Anime & Comics · Gilgamesh9669

PhantomMaou7
PhantomMaou7
5 days ago
Commented

It's a good story but it could use a bit of tidying up, you've rush areas and forget that he still has a family to interact with, life in school before MC got his memory back (currently feels a bit forced, can set it as always being at Midtown)

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PhantomMaou7
PhantomMaou7
6 days ago
Commented

Also might want to confirm who was arriving

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PhantomMaou7
PhantomMaou7
11 days ago
Commented

Like he can talk

Wow, talk about violation of privacy.

The Sage of the Mind

The Sage of the Mind

Movies · IdleMuse0307

PhantomMaou7
PhantomMaou7
12 days ago
Commented

since "Howard" was dead not "Tony"

They did not have the best of reputation at the time and that certainly did not help his case. As a result, Anton Vanko rotted away in Soviet Russia and Ivan Vanko grew up with a deep seated pathological hatred for the name Stark. Since Tony was dead, he set his sights on the man who piloted a walking armour of a tank.

The Sage of the Mind

The Sage of the Mind

Movies · IdleMuse0307

PhantomMaou7
PhantomMaou7
12 days ago
Commented

when someone says "I'm not your enemy" it usually means they are, this lot are definitely not his friends.

"Relax, kid. I'm not your enemy. I'm Clint Barton. Fury sent me to be your instructor." He paused, assessing Max's distrustful expression before continuing. "I imagine this is... a bit confusing, but listen carefully because I don't like to repeat myself."

Marvel: Shadow Thief "Solo Levelling System in Marvel"

Marvel: Shadow Thief "Solo Levelling System in Marvel"

Anime & Comics · StorylineShifter