22darthvadrulesall

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2018-07-31 เข้าร่วมแล้ว Global
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22darthvadrulesall
22darthvadrulesall
3 days ago
Posted

What's going on with the grammar? Is this a Chinese translation? I've only seen this kind of broken English there before.

22darthvadrulesall
22darthvadrulesall
3 days ago
Commented

lol the grammar is funny

"You are not allowed to talk about this anymore, or I will, Anbu," Kakashi spoke coldly.

Naruto: Path towards Godhood

Naruto: Path towards Godhood

Anime & Comics · Evil_Paragon

22darthvadrulesall
22darthvadrulesall
5 days ago
Commented

Whats with this world erasing stuff!!!!!!!! This came out of nowhere!!!

"No, I am not. This world is erasing me but before I am erased, I will make one complete change. Then, Straw Hat Pirates will face the World Government on their own."

Vice Captain of the Straw Hat Pirates

Vice Captain of the Straw Hat Pirates

Anime & Comics · Evil_Paragon

22darthvadrulesall
22darthvadrulesall
22darthvadrulesall
2 months ago
Commented

I’ll be honest, the way Nappa died and triggered Vegeta’s FSSJ was both horrific and deeply disrespectful. It would be traumatizing for anyone who witnessed it, even if they didn’t know Nappa personally. I can’t imagine how you plan to handle Krillin’s death to trigger Goku—it’s going to be tough to top that.

22darthvadrulesall
22darthvadrulesall
2 months ago
Posted

buybuibiub

22darthvadrulesall
22darthvadrulesall
2 months ago
Posted

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22darthvadrulesall
22darthvadrulesall
2 months ago
Posted

is this abandoned?

22darthvadrulesall
22darthvadrulesall
4 months ago
Commented

so cooooooooooooooooooooooooolllllllllllllllllllllll !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

22darthvadrulesall
22darthvadrulesall
5 months ago
Posted

This is one of the best Dragon Ball Z fan fiction I’ve ever read. It captures each character’s personality perfectly, blending elements of both DBZ Abridged and DBZ canon. No character feels one-dimensional or wasted—every antagonist is given respect, even if they’re silly. They’re all dangerous in their own right, using their abilities in creative and unexpected ways. It’s rare to find a fic that hits so many positive elements consistently, but this one nails it every time. The self-insert (SI) character's development is also surprisingly well-handled, which is uncommon in most SI stories. Typically, the SI has a plan, and all the characters fall into place as if the protagonist is on Aizen or Gendo's level of manipulation. Here, though, the SI actually feels guilt, and other characters, especially those known for being geniuses or highly intelligent rightfully suspicious of him from the start. It adds a layer of realism and complexity you don’t often see in these stories.

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