Ototsu_Yume

Ototsu_Yume

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Ototsu_Yume
14 minutes ago
Posted

1/4/1/2/3 I do not doubt this review will be deleted by the author like every other review that isn't 5 star spam of people who freely admit to reviewing due to being friends of the author. Writing Quality 1 Star - It's DxD but lacking everything DxD was with an otherworldly Chinese guy with a western name for some reason now going to Kuoh even though he graduated from school already, so if you enjoy following the story of a guy preying on school girls this might be for you. Stability of Updates 4 Stars - The chapter releases are frequent enough. Story Development 1 Star - The Author is going out of their way to force canon with the MC saying how he wants canon to go exactly the same to the point of letting himself be killed despite not even being Issei, it's beyond lazy and a complete copy paste of the original but with less character to it, best example would be likening this to a generic knockoff to a popular fandom. Character Design 2 Stars - The main character is a bunch of generic tropes from both JP and CN fanfiction thrown into a blender complete with looking like Satoru Gojo, every other character is a cardboard cutout version of their canon selves with all females turning into S-Dolls and all the males existing only to look pathetic and ugly when compared to Gojo. World Background 3 Stars - It's DxD without any changes. It goes from 5 to 3 stars due to the bimbofication of the main cast and the addition of the MC.

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Ototsu_Yume
31 minutes ago
Commented

They knew about Issei because Azazel gave them an assignment to watch him and other sacred gear users in the area while Koko the crack elf told them to off him. This is a guy who just showed up and already has a honey trap being used on him. Author is trying to force canon so hard that it's coming off as unbelievable and incredibly lazy.

The girl who asked was beautiful. She had very long brown hair and eyes so big and red that they looked like two mesmerizing rubies. I couldn't blame Issei for being fooled by her, for I could easily have been, too, if I hadn't known it was Raynare, a fallen angel.

DxD: My Main Skill is Winning Hearts

DxD: My Main Skill is Winning Hearts

Anime & Comics · Palmer_1998

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Ototsu_Yume
34 minutes ago
Replied to Kibbinz

More than half here, this was pushing all those generic knock off Chinese fanfic buttons before this alongside the generic Gojo mc. Sigh...

The best way for me to avoid too many complications was to follow the standard high school DxD story.

DxD: My Main Skill is Winning Hearts

DxD: My Main Skill is Winning Hearts

Anime & Comics · Palmer_1998

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Ototsu_Yume
37 minutes ago
Commented

This guy is going to be socially confused af with a name like that, past in a chinese academy and now in a Japanese school as a grown man preying on schoolgirls.

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Ototsu_Yume
39 minutes ago
Commented

Another author who is gay for Gojo it seems.

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I just didn't know at the time that people were looking at me because I was someone different from the usual at this school. I wasn't very tall in my world, but for high school, especially in Japan, 1.80m is crazy. I also had white hair and blue eyes, so I was bound to attract attention.

DxD: My Main Skill is Winning Hearts

DxD: My Main Skill is Winning Hearts

Anime & Comics · Palmer_1998

Ototsu_Yume
Ototsu_Yume
39 minutes ago
Replied to Zxq0

Purple eyes in DxD seems to be limited to Fallen Angels and the Sitri clan so he'd be pretty sus there.

I just didn't know at the time that people were looking at me because I was someone different from the usual at this school. I wasn't very tall in my world, but for high school, especially in Japan, 1.80m is crazy. I also had white hair and blue eyes, so I was bound to attract attention.

DxD: My Main Skill is Winning Hearts

DxD: My Main Skill is Winning Hearts

Anime & Comics · Palmer_1998

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Ototsu_Yume
43 minutes ago
Replied to SONA_SITRI

Dunno man, if Rias and Akeno told him to kill his other two friends in exchange for some pafu pafu~ he'd probably have shanked them before they finished speaking.

The change I had made in this world... Without the Boosted Gear, Issei Hyoudou's fate changed drastically, and he was completely excluded from this story. As a person, I wasn't sure how to feel, but as a fan, it was great! After all, Issei was the definition of a loser to anyone who liked animes.

DxD: My Main Skill is Winning Hearts

DxD: My Main Skill is Winning Hearts

Anime & Comics · Palmer_1998

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Ototsu_Yume
45 minutes ago
Commented

Eh, this is wrong, only Issei was into the big oppai, one of the other two liked little girls and the other one also had a niche, forgot what his was though.

"Aha! And our girlfriends will have huge breasts!" Motohama agreed and nodded.

DxD: My Main Skill is Winning Hearts

DxD: My Main Skill is Winning Hearts

Anime & Comics · Palmer_1998

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Ototsu_Yume
48 minutes ago
Commented

Why not just have his family change to a universe that isn't on a spiral to destruction and move them somewhere else? His home universe looks like absolute garbage and it stated that he's the only one from there with a skill to open portals to other universes, so he can't be followed.

"I can't let anyone down. I know almost nothing about this system, but I'm going to make this my second chance. I'm going to get my family out of debt and... I want a wife! MAYBE TWO!"

DxD: My Main Skill is Winning Hearts

DxD: My Main Skill is Winning Hearts

Anime & Comics · Palmer_1998

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Ototsu_Yume
53 minutes ago
Commented

Why are people so obsessed with selecting one of the weakest longinus? It's ranked around 12th of the 14 longinus.

"Very well. Then I would like to replace Issei Hyoudou as the bearer of the Boosted Gear."

DxD: My Main Skill is Winning Hearts

DxD: My Main Skill is Winning Hearts

Anime & Comics · Palmer_1998