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Smitvark1

male LV 14
2019-08-16 เข้าร่วมแล้ว Global
ป้าย 7

Moments 9
Smitvark1
Smitvark1
5 months ago
Commented

The math isn't mathing.

"I should be fine. The Maserati cost me two million three hundred thousand, the Rolls-Royce Cullinan cost eight million, and the house cost thirty-six million. In total, I've spent four hundred sixty-three million, and with other miscellaneous purchases, it adds up to four hundred seventy million."

Mistaking My Sister-In-Law for My Wife After Getting Drunk!

Mistaking My Sister-In-Law for My Wife After Getting Drunk!

Urban · Three Steel Demonic King

Smitvark1
Smitvark1
5 months ago
Replied to DaoistrCVfLZ

leave it as so, it's perfect

[Yes, in order to be a mage one needs mama, which you possess]

Reincarnated in the Villainous Lust System!

Reincarnated in the Villainous Lust System!

Eastern · Pendroid

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Smitvark1
7 months ago
Commented

This is suppose to be Virtues not virus

" As for virus and morals... I ate them when I was hungry," Bai Lung uttered with his generous cold voice that decreased the temperature of the surroundings.

The Lustful Young Master is Sinister!

The Lustful Young Master is Sinister!

Eastern · Cultured_Daoist69

Smitvark1
Smitvark1
7 months ago
Commented

This should be live not leave.

" Kill my disciple? Who has that much courage? Good! Very good! I am on the verge of making a breakthrough to a new realm above Qi Saint, till then, let him leave, "

The Lustful Young Master is Sinister!

The Lustful Young Master is Sinister!

Eastern · Cultured_Daoist69

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Smitvark1
7 months ago
Commented

this should be hem not hymn.

Her autumn-like cherry cheeks turned pale while her finger clutched the hymn of her cloth firmly.

The Sugar Mommy System: The Evil Young Master is Villain!!!

The Sugar Mommy System: The Evil Young Master is Villain!!!

Eastern · Cultured_Daoist69

Smitvark1
Smitvark1
1 years ago
Commented

Dude a womb 15 inches up is too unrealistic even for fantasy standards.

Smitvark1
Smitvark1
1 years ago
Commented

Good novel and all but the 4th wall part was too cringy even for me, and I usually don't feel the cringe but that was just ..... wow.

Smitvark1
Smitvark1
1 years ago
Commented

This should be, "I will get you back for this later."

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Slice Of Life In Fantasy World

Slice Of Life In Fantasy World

Fantasy · Parshant_Morwal