So send him to equally powerful universes my friend, nerfing is never the answer.
That way, it becomes easier to sneak in, plus he can have the identity of a citizen of that universe and maybe deal with the problem of World Oppression.
Harry Potter: Dimensional Wizard
Book&Literature · LazySageDao
Why do a decent % of authors believe a character being ruthless and cold makes them bland and therefore making them weak is somehow an improvement?
(So, I usually try to stay away from these kinds of moments. But recently, I realized how bland of a character he was and decided to add a little human touch to him.
Harry Potter: Dimensional Wizard
Book&Literature · LazySageDao
Thanks but is the MC evil, neutral, good or what?
Haven't read the book yet I came here from your profile, mind describing the MC for me? From the description I think he's evil but then there's no tags so I don't know
Would you say your MC is a good person who would hesitate to kill civilians if they were witnesses or a rational man who would do what it takes? And what's with the faceslapping tag? Thank you in advance
I took a shot and I missed, that's a mistake. I'll go against the most powerful existence known to me while being a child, and I won't hide it either. That's not a mistake, that's a retard's thought process. Believe it or not, a kid can be a retard and not just be excused as "oh he's just a boy." Making him what he should be after a couple of hundred chapters is not character development.
Character development does not mean reading about a borderline retard for the first couple of chapters and then getting the normal version after. There are plenty of smart kids in the world, you don't have to be a reincarnator to be "ruthless" at the start. Believe it or not, not every kid is a saint.
Seems to be a planned out storyline with a general guideline for the future. You understand what kind of MC you get pretty easily and if you like it, this book's for you. Hope it continues!
It's radio and I'll never admit otherwise.
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No point in a response. It does make him weak, it wouldn't make it a bland character, but a more realistic one fitting the "law of the jungle" universe he is in.
(So, I usually try to stay away from these kinds of moments. But recently, I realized how bland of a character he was and decided to add a little human touch to him.
Harry Potter: Dimensional Wizard
Book&Literature · LazySageDao