lostkd

lostkd

male LV 5
2018-06-27 เข้าร่วมแล้ว United Kingdom
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ป้าย 6

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lostkd
lostkd
9 months ago
Posted

love it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

lostkd
lostkd
9 months ago
Posted

The English is poor with a mix of wrong currency to sport to grammar, with often word in the wrong order. I think it's translated so a lot could be fixed but if someone edited it for the writer. Then i would be the usual overpowered supermodel child, who had the memory's of an adult? (idk it's just not clear) Overall could be an OK story but parts are unreadable.

lostkd
lostkd
11 months ago
Commented

5th and 12th grade? In England

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lostkd
lostkd
1 years ago
Posted

Left me wanting more. Loved the character, I'm going to see what else the author has written

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