He’s really getting in the habit of passing out
ch 573 Devil Emperor's Finger
Fantasy · Hateful_Fellow
Well...that was a quick turn around. show potential resources and he’s all in
ch 521 Tempting Benefits
Fantasy · Hateful_Fellow
Umm was raven even on this plane then?
ch 493 Confrontation
Fantasy · Hateful_Fellow
A bit unexpected, hopefully there’s a good reason why people are randomly aggressive to raven.
ch 459 Tournament 1.10
Fantasy · Hateful_Fellow
Well...didn’t exactly specify the type of fight, well done author. The end was very amusing
ch 455 Tournament 1.6
Fantasy · Hateful_Fellow
Merry Christmas!
ch 440 Smelting Trial 1.3
Fantasy · Hateful_Fellow
Merry Christmas zero_things!
ch 166 I challenge you to a duel.
Fantasy · Zero_Things
400 is a good number to complete a story without unnecessary fluff. Of course I’ll do what I can to support when I can. In regards to voting, are you familiar with the goal Method to gain popularity? The author sets voting number goals to provide an extra chapter. It gives the audience a sense of accomplishment and wanting more while drawing in a larger audience from being higher ranked.
ch 84 Contract.
Fantasy · Zero_Things
Interesting, I’m rather impressed on how you handled the potential revenge from superior. Glad to see an author not have brain dead side characters attacking Regardless of consequence but punishing the initial transgressor instead. For the next bit, the girlfriend. although currently powerless its good to have a proactive side character which has potential to be a strong supporting character. Be cautious though, a mis step can derail the overall plot development. However, given your writing so far im rather confident this won’t be an issue for you. If I may ask, do you intend to make this a long story with many chapters, or something shorter but complete?
ch 84 Contract.
Fantasy · Zero_Things
Just a word of caution, be careful of repetitive information. If the reader understands the situation there isn’t a need to rephrase it. Understandably not all chapters can be perfect. However overall your quality has improved lately, Good job with that, not many authors can Improve this quickly.
ch 249 Start of the War
Fantasy · Suryaboddu
This was a wonderful novel. Congratulations on completing it. While I’m not sure this will read, what were you planing with the half celestial bloodline, some characters made a few remarks about it but nothing ever came of it? Seemed like there was an entire group of people waiting for raven or something
ch 940 Finale
Way of the Knights
Fantasy · Hateful_Fellow