pluswill

Pls udate faster. Now about the story. The approach is good. The characters aren't idiots ,like the mc said he's on their side and they just straight on believed him, the characters also have their own thoughts and others . Finally the grammatical error are disturbing but it's still better than many others . So thanks for the story. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]