He may have leveled up, but is still a baby, maybe that
ch 22 The Village by the River
Fantasy · ChildOfAidon
Interested I am, but I don't have a user there, so I don't think I'll be posting comments
ch 80 Epilogue, Book 1
Video Games · QuiteSarcastic
Thank you for such a good work. Hope to read the second book soon, or your next work
ch 80 Epilogue, Book 1
Video Games · QuiteSarcastic
Thanks for all the positive reinforcements you guys have showered me with thus far; you all are the reason I am writing; regardless of feedback, I do look forward to improving further with the help of you all :)
Video Games · QuiteSarcastic
There are always greedy people, and they usually make up for the most part of the antagonist
But from here on, Warcraft, as most people know it, will take a drastic change in the upcoming Book 2. Plots will be derailed, major character deaths will occur, factions will be different, enemies will be much stronger, and there will be... confrontations of interest in regard to several important artifacts, items, territory, and greed.
Video Games · QuiteSarcastic
Simple, magnificent chapter
ch 79 The Defiler, Part 2
Video Games · QuiteSarcastic
Dude, the fights are detailed enough, they are good, really
-Other than that... I have no excuse. I lack experience in writing proper, detailed fights. I do wish to improve, and hence, the result is... This.
Video Games · QuiteSarcastic
Can't y wait
-I know it might have been quite underwhelming, the fact that the MC just simply defeats Archimonde like this, but that being said... wait for explanations and assumptions until you are done reading the next chapter, which will contain LOTS of plot explanations.
Video Games · QuiteSarcastic
I'm struggling to find word to compliment this magnificent chapter
ch 78 The Defiler, Part 1
Video Games · QuiteSarcastic
Thanks for the chapter. I enjoyed the well described fights
ch 77 The Assault On Mount Hyjal And The World Tree Part 5
Video Games · QuiteSarcastic
I was thinking a what if, continue with a magic focused class, what about a priest class but the discipline kind, that allows a mix of light and dark energies. That way one class gives two energies to complete the seven energy veins
ch 77 The Assault On Mount Hyjal And The World Tree Part 5
Video Games · QuiteSarcastic
Thanks for the chapter, it was an awesome fight so far
ch 76 The Assault On Mount Hyjal And The World Tree Part 4
Video Games · QuiteSarcastic
But if I have to admit anything... it's that the drive is back... kind of? And even as I am writing this Author Note, I am considering starting book 2.. or at least brainstorming stuff after my 8k word Epilogue that is coming in... 4 chapters.
Video Games · QuiteSarcastic
Thanks for the chapter, short but awesome nonetheless
ch 75 The Assault On Mount Hyjal And The World Tree Part 3
Video Games · QuiteSarcastic
I have a doubt, when was he supposed to get the third class? Are the other power veins related to that?
-The fact that the MC sits down and contemplates things as he did at the start of the chapter is due to the core of why and how he is here, so keep in mind that it is "plot" and not really forced, but instead an instinctive action over the constant changes he has been getting since the level 100 limit has disappeared.
Video Games · QuiteSarcastic
Nice chapter, liked the twist
ch 74 The Assault On Mount Hyjal And The World Tree Part 2
Video Games · QuiteSarcastic
In this one? Where?
-Fun fact: the well of eternity replication attempt that Illidan had gone to prison for 10,000 years is still hidden within the world tree, and that was exactly where the MC and Elune were conversing. And I will post the picture of it in the chapter paragraph when I can.
Video Games · QuiteSarcastic
Awesome chapter. Nice twist with the old man
ch 73 The Assault On Mount Hyjal And The World Tree Part 1
Video Games · QuiteSarcastic
Thanks for the awesome chapter
ch 23 How to Kill a Mage
The Chronicles of a Scalebound Sage
Fantasy · ChildOfAidon