there not going to clean the fish?
grammar is terrible , very hard to read
stuck in a starter village, that's the stupidest thing ever, a half a million dollar dept for a gaming capsule? Who could play that game except for the rich, once again a stupid idea. dropped
though the mc is fair, he doesn't seem to be goat material. according to what you wrote his improvements are slow. he should have a very good career. but he is no goat even with his sub par system.
your experience system is messed up . 10 exp for a tough creature. and half a million points to lvl. if he didn't have the 10,000 time,multiplier he wood never make tier 3.
It's going to be almost impossible to convince anyone that he isnt the next demon king considering he uses dark magic and has a demoness.
I thought the mc had high IQ?
scrambled eggs and toast are delicious ? what did they do to make eggs so delicious ? cook them . wow, now thats a chef 👨🍳
he should put some points in intelligence
his parents spent a lot of money on him and even took out a big loan. isnt he going to help payback
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