Blueman97

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2019-05-10 เข้าร่วมแล้ว Global
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Blueman97
Blueman97
3 months ago
Commented

honestly I am more excited for this than the main story at the moment

Blueman97
Blueman97
3 months ago
Commented

this is just for the tarnished, i hopes he looks like the mc, just for the kick of it.

Blueman97
Blueman97
6 months ago
Commented

another banger chapter by the main man

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Blueman97
Blueman97
9 months ago
Commented

for a moment i thought mc received Yahweh's inheritance. cus you know "Let there be light"

Blueman97
Blueman97
12 months ago
Commented

this is the third novel with the same type of cliffhanger and its infuriating me, all of them are good but it always ends on the most interesting parts.

Blueman97
Blueman97
1 years ago
Commented

+1

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Blueman97
Blueman97
1 years ago
Posted

honestly this lost my interest in the third chapter in the second chapter they are talking to the mc as if they know his future the dialogue feels unnatural, there is no development of character in the second chapter or third with the mother and sister is as if they only know how to kingdom business. What I mean is that there no natural feeling to how a family should feel. Then the icing on the cake taking the mc as a 4 year old to practice combat, bruh.

Blueman97
Blueman97
1 years ago
Commented

BROOOOOOOOO ANOTHER CHAPTER HAS COME

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Blueman97
Blueman97
1 years ago
Posted

The story is good, but so far it is just a summary of a story like a recap with i think 3 chapters with actual dialogue when I read it......

Blueman97
Blueman97
1 years ago
Replied to Daoist_librarian

or hear me out get the ki engine she stole