Painskeleton

Author if you are see this then some tips (just my opinion) -no need to have that much harem very quickly. Have at most 6 or 7 and gradually show their interest in MC. - MC had no need for enhancement ...you could have given him new powers through force. ( stick to one type of power ) - Do not complicate stuff such as control of fate and all from the beginning unless he got hurt by it. (it matters not If someone if higher being, it is not related) for example if he wanted to kill someone but force stops him more than 3 times, then he will resists. - let him have male friend or normal acquaintance as well. - no need for comidic stuff most of the time or that much dialogue of things MC thinks in his mind. Hope this would be helpful anyway this was a great novel even though I could not finish it. Will try your other works sometime

In addition....I forgot to write this. You may have already seen others comment but I'll still say, the world building is very good. Plots are gaad as well. It's completed so no need for updates. Characters are not that good in my opinion but creating a genuine character that everyone likes is hard.

I really loved it till end of volume 1. But from the 2nd, it got bad atleast in fir my taste. I think i would have liked it when I was just starting to read novels and harem and overpowered mc and such. But now not so much. So I'm pretty sure you would like it but there could come a time when it will depend on your taste. But I recommend you to atleast try to read a few chapters.