SimmeringHours

Writing quality: good grammar. Easy to read. Story development: A lot of action so far. Fast paced. Unlike the other stories, this story has an episodic feel to it Character design: lacks some depth to characters so far. It's like stock characters almost. Updating Stability: daily update of 1 chapter World background: can't tell so far

The story is pretty good so far. I like the quality and detailed background and all, just MC needs to show off power more, though I get why he's not, reasonable motives. Maybe less buildup, more climax scenes. Or just write more, don't leave us waiting. Keep it up!