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I published it officially. So started from scratch again!
amazon is probs the easiest to access. still under "jelim" for author
I'm getting this from google translate so sorry if it's wrong...I find it hilarious that in 2 yrs you're the first one to point this out. There is plenty wrong with this battle scene. Good thing I'm rewriting the whole series, huh?
Thank you for the review! (though I have no idea who garron whited is...)
Well would you look at that, I did too. Why has no one else pointed that out? This book has been out for nearly 2 years! (Jelim is ever-so-slightly embarrassed)
And he does come to realise this given time. But to understand why he is so angry about not being given a choice in the matter, you need to think about the first 17 or so years of his life when he was brought up not to think for himself. Meeting Rassa opened up that door for him. Rassa was basically the turning point for him in experiencing choice, and yet not only did Rassa abandon him and Eboney, leading to another 2 1/2 or so years where he was given little to no choice, but upon returning just after Aegin had freed himself, Rassa took another choice from him. This is why Aegin is so angry, the very individual who first inspired true choice in him took away arguably the most important choice of his life. Hope this helps, and thanks for your support!
Just fixed it. There is an invite code on the summary page of the book.
Hmmm, only other place I can think of is the Author Chapters. I'll have a look around later today
Thought I replied to this, Sorry. A*mazon has it 'The Birth of a Monster' by 'Jelim'
The Birth of a Monster (The First Vampire I)
Fantasy · Jelim