Good story but it feel like there are more advert chapters them plot chapters
just realised he could have reverse summon him self and hide with his summons for three days
only a few chapters so far but looks good I love a good alchemy story so hope it keeps going, interesting hints at the background with the immortals chapter
hope your doing ok and sorry to hear you were in hospital
I dont want to be too op.... picks the two broken powers
Anthony took this into consideration and after a lot of thinking he didn't want to be super overpowered to the point he wouldn't need to work hard he came to a final decision he would choose to have perfect chakra control and the ability to copy people's Kekkei Genkai only cause he has always wanted to have the sharingan. He also told him he wanted to be in the same class as Naruto while also living in the Hidden leaf village.
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Anime & Comics · CopySimply
fantastic start to the story
thank you for the chapter loving the story so far
mate take a week of the try for one chapter if things are chaos still take a few more days don't panic about writing 50 chapters people will just be happy to see you writing again
just use find and replace to fix names
Naruto: teaching disciples for ten thousand times the Reward
Anime & Comics · Ahmed_Riaz