I want more updates this is one if the best stories ive been reading so far
Nvm
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Fantasy · AstralGodZero
Y such a big nerf
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Fantasy · AstralGodZero
Tower of god??
Arthur rolled his eyes" Not happening, you're a princess, I'm sure there hundreds of people getting in line to help you climb."
Anime & Comics · Iseeyou6969
Dont take none of to heart just keep writing and youll eventually become a great writer. Artist never created a master peice in their first few creations.
Im not a writer so i cant realy help in that regard i just felt like it was all happening fast but its still a good story and doing better than anything i could write
Im not a writer so i cant realy help in that regard i just felt like it was all happening fast but its still a good story and doing better than anything i could write
Im gonna give an honnest review/opinion i feel like to me the story is too rushed and that it should be slowed down cause i was getting lost sometimes but other than that love the story and keep improving and making good stories.👍🙂
I also alhavent read it yet but hey im second reveiw so its fine gonna tead it soon
Boo from open season
The big black bear noticed Song Xiaomei's gaze. It immediately picked up the rice bowl and stood up. It waited with a silly smile on its face as if it wanted to eat something.
Global Reincarnation: Becoming A God With My Unlimited Revive
Fantasy · One Punch Cute King