i think you should combine the two options, there are not many mystery novels out there and being the addams you can't miss that, a 60 slice of life and the rest mystery. so far i really like the way the story is going.
2. I like this development, I want to see the sequel of this story as it is.
Wednesday Addams' Second Personality (Deprecated)
TV · Frowfy
will there be romance? i hope so, in LOTM i would have loved to have romance so please let there be romance in this novel.
Personally I like to think that he didn't suddenly become stupid but that he saw this place as a new beginning giving himself the opportunity to trust, thinking that maybe it would be different that he wouldn't be alone, after all if you never had anyone deep down you would be desperate to have someone to trust no matter how mature they are, after all feelings are irrational.
"What good has it all done me?"
A Wanderer's Lies
Anime & Comics · _MYSTERY
i can understand that some may complain but they already implied that to some extent he is being influenced by destiny, hence the difference between how he treats others and how he treats logan and oliver.
Though Isaac knew Katlynn wasn't in her right mind during the events that occurred before he'd entered his scenario, it didn't change the fact that she knew he was the intruder, including his strength.
A Wanderer's Lies
Anime & Comics · _MYSTERY
at some point you will upload a photo of the protagonist? you could use one AI
Consciousness thundered through my senses as the coldness of night swept past my bare skin. My eyes began to flutter open as the voracious nature of reality around me brought a calmness to my mind. Winter winds grazed my skin and caused goose bumps to rise along my exposed arms and legs. I was wearing a small pair of pants and shirt that were barely enough to cover my assets. Looking down with my actual eyes I saw the odd sight of light purplish skin refracting small amounts of moonlight. My nails were a beautiful obsidian black and gleamed in the moon's hollow light. My ears twitched as If they were a moveable appendage, something that was soon confirmed as I tried to twitch them again.
A New Life, Beyond Realms: Tensura x Overlord
Anime & Comics · Alex_Simmonds
in reality this is orion's fault, he mentioned his sister and she went into an unstable mental state and concluded that everything was caused by issac, besides she is cursed and that makes her obsessed with issac although it is not revealed why. the reason for the costume I have no idea
With it came countless emotions. Helplessness, anger toward Katlynn and even fear.
A Wanderer's Lies
Anime & Comics · _MYSTERY
I like the previous one better, from the personality to the way you built the plot, it was slow but gave space for the development of the characters, plus I like the mentality that the protagonist had before to see the world and its people as living offspring and not just trying to advance in the ranking, so far I'm disappointed with the rewrite, the previous one seems better at least at the beginning, this one skips so many interactions and descriptions that it's unfortunate, it goes too fast for my taste. Not to offend, just what I think because I liked the previous one.
i have a hard time understanding mc, he's a good guy most of the time but when it comes to lust i don't know what to think, i understand it's because of his past and all that but it seems like there's more lust than feelings for his girls and i say this because of the few times his feelings are mentioned. his thoughts almost always go towards lust, what i want to know is he going to be more consumed by lust or not? very good story!
the brand does that? personally I don't like them to be influenced by something to change but to do it because they want to and that it is their conscious decision without external influence.
Mai wasn't sure to be aroused or scared... but then again, that was the whole point. Pain and pleasure and seeing the red print of Nik's palm on Azula's trembling butt cheeks, Mai couldn't help but gulp audibly. She wanted to try it... and the mark always made it easier to accept a few things. Mai hadn't said anything but she was beginning to wonder that the Mark of Fertility didn't only increase the body's sensitivity... but during the mark is applied... it also served to shift one's thoughts to a more... degenerative side. She could think about that later, however, as her hands already acted against her will be planting a breeding tattoo over her crotch and dialing it up to 8 times rather than 5.
Paradise of Infinity
Anime & Comics · FanHarem
don't leave out the slice of life, many novels skip those parts which leaves a novel with too fast a pace and therefore less content and shorter, personally what I like most about novels are the interactions between the characters and the changes they have in their way of thinking after all it doesn't take a traumatic event to change the characters as many do.
"I don't want to wait so long just to see the sequel of it, you're so slow." -> Six chapters will be uploaded today. The volumes will be shorter just to prepare the Mazurka (unless the readers want more slice of life). I'll try to update more often too, just a promise yet.
Wednesday Addams' Second Personality (Deprecated)
TV · Frowfy