AndersonPa

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2018-06-28 เข้าร่วมแล้ว Global
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AndersonPa
AndersonPa
22 days ago
Commented

In my opinion, the story could have been developed further with new challenges or something about her daily life settling down again after her time in the sun before gaining new powers.

AndersonPa
AndersonPa
27 days ago
Commented

If the goal was to increase chakra, just once could it simulate sealing a bijuu

AndersonPa
AndersonPa
1 months ago
Replied to Jose_Figuer

I think the correction hasn't been updated in the chapter yet

AndersonPa
AndersonPa
1 months ago
Commented

I have the impression that there was good progress in the writing, the fight was much better than the previous ones, which had few descriptions and already jumped to the conclusion.

AndersonPa
AndersonPa
1 months ago
Commented

It would have been interesting if it had had her fights with the league instead of jumping straight to the hit kill savage and circe.

AndersonPa
AndersonPa
1 months ago
Commented

So far a good fanfic, but I miss more parts of the fights.

AndersonPa
AndersonPa
1 months ago
Commented

successfully balanced

AndersonPa
AndersonPa
1 months ago
Commented

Yes, wait for the development of her powers with the rings and the threats she will face

At last, Kara looked down at the rings already on her hand and shrugged. She decided to accept the five hovering nearby. She already had four on; what was a few more?

Dc: Start Female Superman

Dc: Start Female Superman

Anime & Comics · Jose_Figuer

AndersonPa
AndersonPa
1 months ago
Commented

It would be interesting to have her with the green lantern ring, it would give her versatility with her constructions and it would be another layer of disguise for her powers, as well as being something more different and an opportunity to explore this power that was barely used in the films. .

AndersonPa
AndersonPa
7 months ago
Commented

One thing from this world that can be used to help him create golems based on the animals present, like he did with the spider.