Just_A_Man

Just_A_Man

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I am just a guy.

2018-03-12 เข้าร่วมแล้ว Jamaica
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Just_A_Man
Just_A_Man
3 years ago
Commented

I haven't finished them actually. Just wanted to see how everything is going

Just_A_Man
Just_A_Man
3 years ago
Replied to MasterHexer

I haven't completely caught up yet but I assume I missed out on the character entry. I also hope you have been doing well

Just_A_Man
Just_A_Man
3 years ago
Commented

Shouldn't he be a bit more understanding ?. You have the face of the man that traumatized them. Maybe you could try to shape their personalities for the better. Being petty about being rejected and not trying to work things out slowly is just immature

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Just_A_Man
Just_A_Man
3 years ago
Replied to MasterHexer

Time to read the previous chapters now. I was just waiting for 219 to understand her motivation and I will no read the previous chapters. She sincerely just needs someone to lean on. No offense to Zoë, though just sounds like a really good friend with infatuation to Aisha.

Just_A_Man
Just_A_Man
3 years ago
Commented

Author I made my comment under rainstarlight. You have a solid way of writing in making readers feel emotional. It just needs a bit of polish

Just_A_Man
Just_A_Man
3 years ago
Replied to MasterHexer

Author, it's quite amazing that you made like a character again. Just making me understand her reasons for some of her decisions. And fear is such a primal feeling that I can understand her a lot. I wish I was there just to tell her after being hurt for so long by one gender and going to another thinking it would help is not the right decisions and loneliness and seeking relationships when you're in that state is just not healthy. Speaking from own experience. I found hope in God. Honestly just want to create my character just to help her. I sound like old man talking to his daughter.

Just_A_Man
Just_A_Man
3 years ago
Replied to yearafteryear

I think its one of the few that had character development.

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Just_A_Man
Just_A_Man
3 years ago
Replied to MasterHexer

Webnovel can be strange at times. Anyways, I will try reading at the end of the day to read my average three chapters that I can. Hopefully Chapter 219 makes me love her character again. Her telling Peter to go and leave her in the first part of the story still hits me in the feels when I think about it. Based off friendship and infatuation so I do like her. Just not it her decisions. But we shall see soon enough

Just_A_Man
Just_A_Man
3 years ago
Replied to MasterHexer

Appreciate the well wishes. This story has always made me smile and I am surprised this is a first draft for your story. You never forced anything in story and although this doesn't feel preachy. At least you made showed that the world doesn't revolve around Peter and people have a life of their own. Do I agree with Aisha.No. She dropped in favourbility but she is a character that does her purpose. So I this great. I just hope that this blows up

Just_A_Man
Just_A_Man
3 years ago
Commented

By the way author I may not be commenting alot or reading new chapters because of exams coming up and because of Aisha and Zoë is something my beliefs doesn't support. But this is a wonderful story I will try reading it when I can. Its rough ar9und the edges but it will get better

  • Binding original

    Binding

    Fantasy

    Contracts. This has been the way of our world. The agreements between a mortal and a god. We do not know why they do this. What do they want ? Why us ? Who do they fear ?

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  • The Era original

    The Era

    Fantasy

    The mark you leave during your life and how you change,affected and influence the people you met. That Is An Era. Have you created an Era

    4 Chs 1 คอลเลกชัน