Warning: this review is based on reading the entire novel on MTL. (End spoiler) Disclaimer: The person who translates this does put in effort so 5 stars for writing quaility! also the fan fiction is good except the ending/last few chapters. in my opinion this novel could have been something amazing, yet the author's plot becomes a mess of an ending. The Author even said it himself that it was supposed to be about developing the organisation, yet transformed into all kinds of POV of different characters causing the MC becomes just the train everyone talks about but doesn't enter. The abrupt and rushed ending was truly sad, the climax was lackluster and the author even admitted that it was rushed and that the passion was gone, instead promoting new books at the end of the last chapter. also no follow up, MC makes the sage of six-paths and Kaguya Talk it out due to misunderstandings in the past as the sage of six-paths didn't know about the family. they make up and end of story, and the end battle was just confusing and forced, making no sense with the other characters just there for emotional expression. the original author:
the Devs are aliens gracefully giving a chance to gain power and humans complain anyways..m
The day after this player made his criticisms, he was permanently banned from the game without any explanation from the game officials.
Global Game: Ten Billion Spirit Energy Coins From The Start
Games · Dull Fireball
yes, that was probably the quest to get information on the song
"Ding! Hidden quest [Savi Goddess's Tear (11/20)] activated, do you accept?"
Global Game: Ten Billion Spirit Energy Coins From The Start
Games · Dull Fireball
patience, other authors took years
I haven't, I've been writing but not publishing, I want a masterpiece
thank you
please stop, choose, it's either him or her not both, it's making it confusing to read
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Supreme Elf God
Fantasy · Zeka8
Yup,
true even worse, he basically mass murdered his own children
I open my eyes wide, a smug look was on ''God's'' face. I reply without hesitation ''You claim to be the god? Should I be surprised or not, many people like to be idiots these days. Look, if you want to say you are a god, that is fine. But please come back when you are a normal being again. Because speaking to god means speaking to a mass murderer who killed a few million people if we follow the bible's words. Or god is a person who hates life, hence I would like to avoid meeting such a dangerous and weird man.''
The War That Transcends Timelines!
War · Chaos_Overseer
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original The War That Transcends Timelines!
4.62
Time. Time is intangible! Or so they said Sadly, we were wrong, time can be bent, bent to another's will. Empires stretching through the annals of another's history, Men of another race fighting in another man's war, technology, unknown to the Natives used to destroy them outright! Men fighting over resources not found in their Universe, troops fighting throughout the ages, brave heroes live and die. this... this is The War That Transcends Timelines! Kyle wit, abducted by a Mighty Empire to spearhead a section of their war is thrown right in the midsts of it! And through this trail be fire and death he shall go down in the annals of everyone's history and be known by enemies and allies as: The Marshall. A story where blood paints the earth, cruelty is common, men in the millions fight, shady politics, multi-layered planning and above all one person to fight against the norm. Comments keep me motivated, the biggest source of happiness for almost any author Per (war)period 100-150 chapters or 100,000-150,000 words. One chapter between one to two days, one guaranteed teaser beforehand. Top 100 Guarantees Two 9-14 Chapters a week For people, there is a discord page: https://discord.gg/EQYQ6CJ158 Chs 3.5k คอลเลกชัน
- original
Home Is Where Your Heart Is
*Warning! Opening Cryostasis pod 1* I covered my eyes as a piercing white light shone into them while trying to think about what happened. And in less than 2 seconds my brain felt like it was being split apart as my memories flood back in. *Warning! Resident 1 is experiencing extreme brain fluctuations* I looked around me as I grabbed my head in pain, I could make out faint shadows from the piercing light shining into my eyes, 'Who are yo...' Before I could finish my sentence I fell unconscious, the only thing stuck in my mind is that the shadow wasn't human. -------------------------------------------------- Hello readers, This is the 2nd book I will be writing, having written over one Hundred sixty thousand words I can confidently say I have a good amount of experience. The story is about a young man being woken up in a world no longer similar to ours and him having to cope with it mentally, the real story starts however at a malfunction with the Hyper-drive, causing our MC to be transported somewhere unknown and alone. Follow him as he deals with the Unknown and the unfamiliar. Due to a busy life, the Chapter release is about 3-2 Chapters per week. Tags: Clever protagonist, Anti-Hero Protagonist, Wars, Politics, Adventure.9 Chs 30 คอลเลกชัน
update?
Naruto: Uchiha Madara's Cousin
Anime & Comics · Rashta