Story progression is good. Author made a realistic MC. Terrible writing quality. Can’t tell if everything is translating weird or the racist comments are deliberate.
Maybe drop the “the” Like bjorn iron side Not bjorn the iron side
All of them nodded at what he said, and one of the men who had been silent throughout the conversation of the three people opened his mouth "Archmaester Garth, Archmaester Wills, Archmaester Ains and Seneschal Rigney. You all have to remember that, even if the King of the Reach gave us permission to send Maesters to the North. If the King of the North declines our entry we won't be able to do anything. It's his territory, the North is under the protection of Brandon the Ice Eyes."
A Song Of Ice And Fire: The King Of Winter
Book&Literature · EddyVirgil
Can he upgrade it by combining with his current method?
Legend has it that in ancient times, it was created by an unnamed powerhouse. Initially, this Qi Method was of Yellow Rank Low Level, capable of evolving infinitely by devouring powerful flames, even breaking through to the Heaven Rank Qi Method! Ancient Emperor Tuo Shi, the first practitioner of this method, ascended to Dou God status thanks to this Qi Method!
BTTH I can strengthen all things
Anime & Comics · sakuraii
Or “the wolf in the snow”
Today is the day… a new phase in my life.I can't believe I'm squiring for the Demon Lord! If there is a lord I seek to be like in Westeros its him. He came up from nothing. A sellsword. To the richest house in the North and the strongest navy this side of the neck.
Mercenary (Asoiaf)
Book&Literature · Ash_D_Born
Wouldn’t it be redundant if Mc chooses the evolving qi method when he can already do that on his own?
Great chapter Excited to see how they deal with vandal savage
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Don’t tease me bro! Kinda would of liked some original guardians not gonna lie
So it’s like vampires Got it 👌🏾
"One more thing before I leave, demons can turn people into demons by feeding them blood. Do not swallow any demon blood or I will personally decapitate you" He got up and headed towards the door. "Oh right I almost forgot, to kill a demon you have to cut it's head off. Well then, I'm off"
Demon Slayer: The Ice Hashira
Anime & Comics · sucroseliker
I remember there was a fanfic where the MC reincarnated through his descendants. Maybe work something like that in?
Why not have ascendency people join with shepherd ? Axel’s son?
It also gave them some insights into some of the weapons that the Reapers were using as well as how they invaded worlds. With fresh insights from Shepard's visions, strategic meetings were convened to discuss potential defense measures and offensive strategies. The more time passed the more the situation got dire, as what the Prothean scientists did was only delay the Reaper invasion, so as time passed on, it is only a matter of time before they eventually arrive and started their harvest of the galaxy.
Halo Reborn
Video Games · Dr_Dred