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Of course, you may not want to segir my suggestion, I have no problem with this, it's just my preference of history, each one has yours.

How are you thinking about the schedule? Will you post daily or just a few times a week? I liked the idea and your writing, I hope you continue writing, good luck with your work.

I'm not bothered by your story, it's just my impression of the original work. Because for me, if it weren't for the original author's perversion, Natsuha wouldn't even be with a guy who is uglier than her boyfriend, which is why in these works I like to see these women having a better ending than the original work portrays. You can say that Natsuha came with the betrayal and I agree, but the author "justifies" himself by saying that she is a nymphomaniac, since I have already met some people who were and they were not despicable like her and portrayed in the work. But I'm sorry, this is more my opinion and I just wanted to express, I don't care how you continue the story, I just want to read a good story.

Author, I know that Natsuha cannot be forgiven, and I liked how you resolved things in this chapter, but I wish you would improve her character, because even in hentai, she is very shallow, could you make her overcome this idiot of yellow hair and continue your normal life, still regretting your betrayal, mother at least don't give this yellow-haired idiot a taste for more than he already had.

I was reading it at first because I liked how the interactions were, but when you started adding more and more of this nonsense, I didn't like the story more and more, that's why I'm abandoning it, I just wanted to write to vent, because I liked the 6 chapters It was from this point on that I didn't like the story anymore.

I was reading it at first because I liked how the interactions were, but when you started adding more and more of this nonsense, I didn't like the story more and more, that's why I'm abandoning it, I just wanted to write to vent, because I liked the 6 chapters It was from this point on that I didn't like the story anymore.

Sorry reader, read the first chapter, but I think I'll abandon his story, I'm not a big fan of waiting on some types of mystery, I'm not saying I don't like it, but whether he's in something like the Matrix or not is kind of unnerving and my anxiety strikes so I won't continue reading, but thanks for the story.

I'm not going to put you in the library, but I'll follow you, if you start to like the next chapters I'll add you, but this chapter was good, just short. Thank you very much for writing. I just wanted to ask a question, are you going to get him back with his ex or something? I don't mind if it's well written, but I think it's better if that doesn't happen and he just forgets about her.

Of course, the author doesn't need to follow my suggestions, my main question would be what he is planning for them, whether it would just be discarded or they would be integrated into the protagonist's love life.

In fact, you could either go for Ravel or Asia, both girls are good, why leave one when you can have both? Also, do you have any estimates for Harem? Would it be big or would it be small (like 10 at most)? I would like to know and good chapter.

Your way of telling the story is very interesting. But I still don't understand very well, is Naruto in a world where he has few men and many women? Or are women futunaris? I won't add it to the library for now, I'll see what the posting frequency will be like. Thanks for the chapter.

It's something that came to me reading this chapter, I wouldn't mind the second option, but it has to be something well worked out, especially since the world he lives in is a Hentai, that's not an impossible thing to happen, but I just hope that if you follow this path, you will make the 4 of them regret it for a long time until they can be forgiven in the slightest.

Author, now I have doubts, will you make the girls in the original work suffer until they kill themselves? Or will you make them suffer a lot, a lot, until they can be forgiven by the protagonist?

I liked the story, but it's a little confusing, is he a transmigrator or just another person who was born in the world of One Piece and was simply lucky enough to receive a system?

Man I love you, I dropped your previous story precisely because of the mind control, I also found the relationship forced, but I still wanted to be able to continue reading because I liked your writing. I'm really looking forward to this rewrite, I'll be following you from now on and I really liked the prologue so far.

Author, so you only posted on the weekend? Or maybe increase the amount of posting? Thanks for cap.