Negative comments always hit harder but I hope my 2 cents help. Your novel is definitely one of the better ones. The early power leveling was a bit much but the fact that the Mc can die every other simulation keeps things real. Characterization is also solid. Pacing was pretty good even if the 7 year time skip is weird but it aligns with the plot well. Overall, this is a good novel, don’t give up on it.
This story is starting to generate a lot of hate, and I've noticed that most of the responses are very negative. I've been receiving 1-star ratings, which I delete because I don't accept hate here or reviews that give 1 star over a single scene they didn't like. I'm halfway through, but I'm starting to lose the motivation to continue posting here. I'm tempted to just give the remaining chapters to my Patreon and be done with it, as the community there is much more peaceful.
Ninja World: I Have a Life Simulator
Anime & Comics · Emik01
Overall I’ll say this is pretty good. There’s a healthy dose of world building beyond the series which adds depth and prevents the story from being stagnant. Writing is also solid but not like I’m a writer but as a reader of many fanfics, the 20 chapters flew by pretty fast. There is a bit of repetition that can be addressed. Rather than say he isn’t open to other characters because he doesn’t know they’re authentic you can phrase it in different contexts. It works but it gets stale if you say it 3+ times the same way. Maybe a bit of consistency in direction would help. Either he’s transmigrating abusing knowledge or he’s a 13 year old out of his depths.
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Pokemon: Master of tactics
Anime & Comics · alex02373
It would be a better explanation to say its an animal zetsu
(Author's note: So basically, how Observation Haki works (Based on the one-piece Wiki) is that the user will sense his opponent's intent and predict his attack based on it. That is why Momonga couldn't sense Wilson coming at him because even though he looks like a human, he is still a gorilla.)
One Piece: The legend of Johnny Silverhand (dropped)
Anime & Comics · Wicked132
I have exams next week as well Good luck sir
Sorry to hear you are getting writers block. maybe you need more conflicts for tayaw. you already had realistic push back in the ealier phases but woth how powerful he is now maybe you cna go into supernatural conflicts. Antognists are good for making the character shine. maybe someone smart tring to ruin him or a creature that goes after his view points.
If youre really throwing love into the mix have you Considered a antagonist of sorts. ‘Maybe something like a critic. it would just flow better if tayaw is dating soemone if equal or relatively equal status
This is a very enjouable story. The author did a good job with world building, character development, and power progression. there is always a new arc with minimal sterotypes and the MC struggles all the time so its not a power fantasy. This is one of those Books you can feel yourself being absorbed into for hours on end.
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One Piece: Path to Power
Anime & Comics · Paradox_
Overall this novel is one the better ones. Power leveing is a little fast at the beginning but MC can still die every other simulations which maintain the stakes. Pacing is good and doesn’t get stuck too much on any one arc. Nothing annoying about the MC.
Ninja World: I Have a Life Simulator
Anime & Comics · Emik01