Kid_Kayor

male LV 12

Disciple of the F5 Sect/Soldier of the 19-Year Old Army

2018-02-04 เข้าร่วมแล้ว United States
ป้าย 14

Moments 66
Kid_Kayor
Kid_Kayor
2 years ago
Commented

why is he surprised

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"This Yulong was a spy!?" Lin Mu was shocked.

Walker Of The Worlds

Walker Of The Worlds

Eastern · Grand_Void_Daoist

Kid_Kayor
Kid_Kayor
2 years ago
Posted

Writing quality is wack, syntax isn't that good and we hear the same words over and over. Power ups just come from the most basic things making it so he'll be OP in no time. All the characters are one dimensional and nonsensical, I mean what's the point of a stepmother paying servants to torment a stepson with a dead mother and mental issues, his father also gave up on him, he's not going to inherit anything so what's the point. Give a reason for your characters actions and not make them do stuff just to fit the plot.

Kid_Kayor
Kid_Kayor
3 years ago
Replied to ArcaneWolf

Their names are pretty similar

The only reason to remain here would be to spend even more time with his family, but that was not a necessity anymore. Yersi was happy, Orthar was gone, and no one else from his family would die in the next millennia. This was the perfect time to return.

Lightning Is the Only Way

Lightning Is the Only Way

Eastern · Warmaisach

Kid_Kayor
Kid_Kayor
3 years ago
Replied to ArcaneWolf

He left like ten chapters ago, have you even been reading

The only reason to remain here would be to spend even more time with his family, but that was not a necessity anymore. Yersi was happy, Orthar was gone, and no one else from his family would die in the next millennia. This was the perfect time to return.

Lightning Is the Only Way

Lightning Is the Only Way

Eastern · Warmaisach

Kid_Kayor
Kid_Kayor
3 years ago
Commented

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Kid_Kayor
Kid_Kayor
3 years ago
Commented

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Having made his decision, he picked one of the seals from the drawer and stored it in his ring, before sinking into the floor using phase. Lin Mu had been continually using phase for more than an hour now, along with his other skills. This had led to quite a lot of consumption of his spirit qi.

Walker Of The Worlds

Walker Of The Worlds

Eastern · Grand_Void_Daoist

Kid_Kayor
Kid_Kayor
3 years ago
Commented

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Noah laughed. "Yea...pretend. I guess even you don't think you're a baseball player."

The Hitting Zone

The Hitting Zone

Sports · half_empty

Kid_Kayor
Kid_Kayor
3 years ago
Commented

lol

Kid_Kayor
Kid_Kayor
3 years ago
Commented

*dinner

"Master diner have been served"

Blood demon leveling

Blood demon leveling

Fantasy · zad1333

Kid_Kayor
Kid_Kayor
3 years ago
Commented

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