Rouge is Southern, I believe it is the Author trying to convey that.
She flinched. "You don't have to apologize, I was just joking! W-What is money to a powerful man? Sugah."
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Make Egypt Great Again!! MEGA!!
Mission: Make the Pantheon Great Again.
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it could be a self imposed sort of stay under house arrest or face the Consequences.
Because of these restrictions, many of Ogdoad's Gods and Goddesses were sealed inside statues if they broke the slightest of restrictions. Even for silly ones such as making river water into wine. As Gods, they ought to have some fun, but that little fun shouldn't cost them millennia of confinement!
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Yup yup this is how kids speak 🤣
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Urban · _Er
yo Author the discord link is expired :/
ch 0 1 Chapter 1. Damien VoidAngel
Fantasy · Parshant_Morwal
*Foul*
Special ability: Fhoul gameplay — this talent makes him stronger when he holds an advantage over his opponent.
Urban · To_not_lose
*praise*
Mohini took a long time to move her gaze away from Kent's face. She shook her head, muttering a prize for Kent's looks.
Fantasy · PeterPan
how is it defensive? I thought that it breaks others defensive spells?
"My average proficiency improved to 75. With full focus, I can achieve 84. But the Void breaker Arrow is a defensive spell and I won't win a tournament just with a defensive spell. It's better to start practicing an attack spell." Kent muttered, assessing his strength and thinking of possible ways to win the tournament.
Fantasy · PeterPan
what are nocturnal pets?
Angelic witches learn healing spells. The male ones are called healers. As for the night witches, they were a mix of both dark and angelic witches. They learn healing spells, curse magic, and usually raise nocturnal pets and use them for fight.
Fantasy · PeterPan
your writing is pretty good, I would recommend using Grammarly to catch those spelling and grammar errors
Note: My writing is very fast paced. It might look forceful/abrupt in some places to read. But to avoid dragging the story by writing poetically, it is must for me. I don't want to use any AI to turn my writing artificial. Hope you understand. TQ.
Fantasy · PeterPan
*feat*
"Just because of your feet at the Arena, I let you use the Aura room for an extra hour. Next time, don't stay after closing time. Do you understand?" The elder spoke with a displeased face as he stood in wait for Kent, even after closing time.
Fantasy · PeterPan
*Boss*
Blackie's eyes widened in surprise, while Whitey nodded in understanding. "Boos, that's impossible. 500 gold is too much for any of our families."
Fantasy · PeterPan
Fat King is a title and should be Capitalized Overall good chapter
ch 45 Hunt for the Golden Falg
Fantasy · PeterPan
I thought he had a red python???
"N-no… nooo…" The fat king shirked in fear while staring at the incoming fireball. Before he even thought of escaping, the black bull began falling from the sky as it lost the thought of flying.
Fantasy · PeterPan
*Shuddered*
Arul, the previous runner-up, who stood beside Mia, shouted angrily as his pet, the red python, shredded in fear after seeing the fires from Kent's pet.
Fantasy · PeterPan
*Tier*
Kent sighed disappointedly after hearing her reply. "The tire-one city is more than 500 miles away from here. As for the capital city..." Kent stopped talking, as the capital city is very distant from Silver Leaf Town.
Fantasy · PeterPan
Maybe do a zero chapter with some of the character names?
Note: This chapter contain several names. Just go with the story. the names will be discussed again, along the story.
Fantasy · PeterPan
the things Gus *stole* from the hotel room...
But just as he opened the bamboo bag, the things Gus steeled from the hotel room fell on the floor with a loud noise.
Fantasy · PeterPan
"probably a mutate or a magician." Mutate and mutant are different? Can someone explain?
[Unfortunately, no. He can't come. I've… read your memories and deduced he's a superhero. But he's not a mutant like us. He's different, probably a mutate or a magician. He can't come to the academy.]
Marvel: False God - Avatar of Ogdoad
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