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2017-07-14 เข้าร่วมแล้ว France
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3 years ago
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Looking good so far ! I usually don't read novels with so few chapters but this seems intriguing and well-written. Maybe a bit hard to tell appart thoughts and speech ? You may want to use different quotation marks. Anyways thanks for the chapter

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3 years ago
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Thanks for the chapter !

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3 years ago
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That was an unexpected but not unwanted development with Erza

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3 years ago
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Thanks for the chapter ! Heh so he's a troll online huh, I like that !

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3 years ago
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OK well I'm not really comfortable with r*pe but hopefully it's the only time. I'll continue reading for now.

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3 years ago
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Oh that was unexpected ! First time seeing a gacha where the MC doesn't get the greatest skill ever on his first pull. I really like the fact that the system did that at least it's not deus ex machina. Liking this more and more !

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3 years ago
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Pretty interesting first chapter, story seems promising. Writing quality seems pretty good too, good job author-san !

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3 years ago
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Thanks for the chapter ! Nice getting some backstory and I like how Xu Yue doesn't just accept the bet and actually considers her odds of winning.

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3 years ago
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Typo here (Xuefeng instead of Liu Ye

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