it sucks that he is using powers homelander doesn't have. he should have handicapped himself. and only used flight, strength and heat vision. that way it's more fun with the battles.
you should have had the MC change his name to Adam. he could pretend to be the original human.
didn't this movie bomb?
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Hollywood Relife
Urban · LuenorSureva14
I'm suprised you don't have like 50 chapters already completed. if I was you I would take a week and write chapters. then release one every 2 days while you keep yourself ahead.
it would be nice if he wasn't on the lacrosse team. that's a little too close to the MC
Technically many girls flirt with me since I am the best player of the lacrosse team and probably the future captain, especially after my new transformation I got an upgrade to my physique, but if I must be stuck with a girl, I want her to be good enough to never bore me.
Teen Lion: a Teen Wolf Fan-Fic
TV · WebReaderPub
that's what I was saying. he's been regrowing his whole body for like 300 chapters.
??? MMA is art that doesn't have any fancy movement. it's literally the most practical stuff from everything.
What's the use of MMA when a spear head pierces your brain or an arrow pierces your lungs? Before you could make any fancy movement, you would already be dead in some gruesome way.
Another Leylin: Warlock Of The Magus World
Book&Literature · SwordDomainGod
shouldn't his fatigue be 2/2 now? how is he able to enter another dungeon.
[You have entered the low level yellow rank dungeon — Rabbit Grassland.]
Alternate World: I Started With Two SSS Templates
Urban · Cold Fried Anchovies
it would be a cool scene once enel saves ace and luffy. and has them on their boa t. he explains why he saved them. how there is no such thing as the gomu gomu no mi. and it's actually the Hita hita no mi : nika
oh man. he should learn ink jutsu. imagine what he could draw.
I blinked, completely caught off guard. "Apollo? As in the Apollo? God of the sun, art, music, archery, poetry, disease and healing?" I muttered to myself. "That Apollo?"
Reborn as a Yamanaka Genius
Anime & Comics · TheDreamofSomeday