Noire

Noire

male LV 14

If one day I die, I'll go up high in the sky. Now that I'm so far, I'll write your name in every star. So when you look up you'll see, how much you really mean to me.

2017-09-07 เข้าร่วมแล้ว Philippines
ป้าย 27

Moments 2415
Noire
Noire
5 hours ago
Commented

Yes please, keep milking those newbies with patreon. They don't know better and thus you can keep milking them. A new sucker is born every single second.

Noire
Noire
2 days ago
Replied to Fula_de_tal

You know how it is, when something gets popular. It gets filled with quick money schemes. At least this one has some mercy. Not like the other ones that has a reminder of their patreon EVERY SINGLE CHAPTER! Doubly annoying for me since I use audio read, it became an ad for me.

Noire
Noire
15 days ago
Commented

People seem to forget. A very important thing with taking life and killing is all about intent. Sure, maybe you'd puke your guts out in seeing dead bodies around you because you accidentally killed everyone because of your negligence. But puking when you have the intention of taking life? That doesn't make sense whatsoever. That would be like puking every time you remember you've eaten living organisms. Shaking from adrenaline rush? Now that's more believable.

Noire
Noire
1 months ago
Commented

As expected of akikan, interesting start then its all downhill from here.

Noire
Noire
1 months ago
Replied to UnknownUser420

Yeah, the typical akikan MC. Author keeps forgetting the MC's template and keeps changing it throughout his stories.

Noire
Noire
1 months ago
Commented

Instead of being completed, it's most likely been abandoned by the original author.

Noire
Noire
1 months ago
Commented

There's a difference in a slow paced story vs an indecisive MC. This MC's character is all over the place. No, it's more appropriate to say he's an ultimate coward. He can spout BS inspiring lines but his actions are contradictory. He wants a lazy peaceful life but keeps attracting trouble to himself. If he wanted a lazy peaceful life he would have ran away and lived in the middle of nowhere. Just make up your damn mind MC. Pussyfooting all over the place is simply annoying.

Noire
Noire
1 months ago
Replied to trxs300

Woot hiding chapters of fanfic in a paywall? Sounds like the copyright lawyers have something to go after to after all. Cease and desist!!!

Noire
Noire
4 months ago
Commented

This story has been big words after another that held no meaning for a couple of arcs now. Story arcs that seem to keep getting recycled. This story seemed to be getting milked for whatever it is worth and is now going nowhere. Ever since the arc with the chronos guy, I seem to be reading a glossary instead of a story. *GASP* There's a bigger enemy out there? Like, are you for real?

Noire
Noire
9 months ago
Posted

Plotholes so abundant you don't know where the plot is. Author keeps having to forced feed villains against the MC. Powerful people that somehow can recruit millions of people while MC retains only a thousand. Introduced a powerful trillionaire ally that treat him as a brother but somehow ended up as a middling side character. Overall an author that makes up stuff out of the air to fit his own narrative. An author that has no respect for his own creation. For people to give this a 5 star is a statement to the current level of the worlds literature.