Zinion

good novel so far, I just hope the author sticks to the side character, yeah hes a Black, so what technically bar Sirius all the other Blacks were side characters in the main story, so it does make sense to a point, my view is if he really is gonna be a side character, eg not putting his face smack bam in the middle of the main plot. if this happens Ill probably stop reading, but its been awhile since i have read an actual good HP fan fiction, so keep up the good work author, I look forward to see how you go. Ill consider being a patreon once i see how many updates your doing, I have a issue paying money then suddenly the author drops to 1 to 2 chapters a month,

I am just gonna say it... did you use a translation app that made it look like a toddler translated it, or was the original writer a idiot? i have read your other works, but this doesn't read like your translations at all. its like its purley Machine then put through AI. I was looking forward to another HP translation but either the novel you picked was written so basic, or your translation method has switched to Machine then AI. What ever it is, its making this novel a real pain in the ass to read

how to put it, it has potential, but I think another reviewer has pointed it out. You can't tell at times when someone is thinking or talking. the explanations are good, but also kind of feels like a lot of wank. you can easily tell this was AI done as it reads like a robot putting commands down. I like the concept, but it needs a proofer and something to go through and edit it so it flows better.