Mercurio

Mercurio

male LV 3
2017-09-24 เข้าร่วมแล้ว Brazil
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1 days ago
Commented

In this chapter it seems that Mark will have something with Eve, if so, then why did he wait all this time to start something? They go to the same school, so he could have met her before and won her heart, instead of letting things go like a cannon and letting her date Rex 🤔🤔🤔

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4 days ago
Commented

Why doesn't he just get a part-time job? Maybe in a bookshop or a restaurant, it's not much but at least he'd be able to have meals or books without just hunting or stealing?

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11 days ago
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Bro I like what you're trying to do here, I like the family background and consequently MC's village, but between you and me, can you read this chapter and appreciate where you're taking the story, making MC learn to read by himself was already a bit bizarre, now you're going to make a super baby who's barely 1 year old, give real advice to the biggest and most experienced leaders of kumo? Future and theoretical knowledge is one thing, but as much as the MC was a good scientist in his other life, and has an enhanced brain in this one, that doesn't make ninja war strategies (which is even more complex because of the super human factor) and kingdom building any easier. I don't want to be the boring one and discourage you, but maybe this story isn't for me, I don't want to see super babies commanding governance strategies, you set out to make a living world, and dude, this shit must be even more complex in Naruto, the ninja factor and chakra makes everything worse, because we have a myriad of great experienced players like konoha and the village of Earth, onoki didn't stay so long in power being dumb

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13 days ago
Commented

Very interesting, the potential of this story overflows in abundance, such refreshing concepts are being tackled in a fantastic way, thanks for the hard work author-san

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