Thanks for the review.
Yes, I made some changes in the Lore, as well in the physical appearance and behavior of some races. I made the changes so that it could fit better in the story I was telling and other changes were just for the convenience of writing.
As red tentacles burst from the ground, the whole planet trembled and fell into chaos.
It was the beginning....the beginning of the end.
Earth was destroyed with the attack of the mysterious creature.
The Terrene Protectorate, the defenders of the universe, were left in shambles after the attack on Earth.
Only a few people were able to flee from the planet before its complete destruction.
John Connor, an 18 years old fresh graduate Protector, was one of those lucky enough to survive and escape.
Armed only with his dubious expertise and a few tools, he will have to avoid the dangers the universe without the Terrene Protectorate can offer, repair his ship, restore the symbol of a defunct organisation and carry the burdens of the fate of the world that lies on his shoulders.
Surviving in this turbulent era won't be easy for our inexperienced John Connor.
With the end of the Terrene Protectorate, numerous factions that were once dormant, will rise and start to fight for power. Outlaws, fanatics, greedy corporations, and governments, the conflict of interests of those groups and factions will lead to an incredible amount of deaths.
Follow John Connor as he explores the wonders of the endless universe, and discover how harsh and unforgiving reality can be.
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Chapters will be about 1000 to 1500 words. (Except for some special chapters.)
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* YOU CAN READ THIS WITHOUT EVER PLAYING THE GAME OR KNOWING THE LORE! EVERYTHING IS EXPLAINED THROUGHOUT THE CHAPTERS, AND EVEN HAVE SOME AUXILIARY CHAPTERS WITH MORE DETAILED EXPLANATION.
I also had to change a lot about the lore of the game to fit in the format of a novel, I really mean a lot, since the game itself doesn't give a lot about its lore and neither have detailed storytelling, since the focus of the game was in exploration and doing whatever the player wants.
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Disclaimer:
This Novel is based on the videogame Starbound by Chuckle Fish.
The image is from the artist LemanRush; I downloaded it from the site DeviantArt.
Also, sorry about my English, it isn't my primary language.
Enjoy...
:D
After his death, Daemon, the Darkness, was banished to the inescapable prison that was made specifically for Gods, Demons and Demigods, the Void Realm.
He stayed imprison for thousands of years until he met a person that called himself the Mad God.
This God decided to give Daemon the chance of reincarnation and thus it happened.
Daemon found himself reincarnated in the body of a exiled member of a magical family, he was called Neo Lumine.
The world he found himself at was completely strange to him. At least he was able to maintain his knowledge over his magic and spells from the previous life.
Will Daemon, or should I say Neo Lumine, be able to use his powers and determination to break through the complex plot he was suddently embroiled at?
Can he unlock his true potential and utilize his new powers to defeat his enemies and discover the truth about his new body's mysterious circumstances?
Not much free time to write, university and studying are what keep me from doing anything else.
Starbound: A Space Odyssey
Sci-fi · ArthurHFSS