Natsujan

Natsujan

male LV 5

Novel binge reader.

2017-08-07 เข้าร่วมแล้ว Global
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Natsujan
Natsujan
20 days ago
Replied to InsanityX

Yeah, sorry... I just lost any motivation to write it by the end. Like I said, I started to write it while sick with Covid to occupy my bored ass mind stuck in quarantine inside my room without a computer or tv. That's why I could just print two chaps a day for two weeks. After that I started to work again and my time became limited. Then just to spend my only free time in the evening trying to brainstorm the story, with so many new characters... After I took a break because of procrastinating and some readers started to bombard even my comments on other stories for new chaps, I kinda just got sick of it. I actually haven't released any other stories cause now I have a problem to actually make more than 10 chaps before switching to another idea.

Natsujan
Natsujan
1 months ago
Commented

Yeah, this part sucked, but oh well. Can't complaim when I didn't write it

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Finally, first time Niko went to Piltover he 'threatened' Heimerdinger, assalted a worker of the Kiramman family, like a peasant hitting a noble, courting death. All this afterhe said he wanted to go 'undercover' to the eyes of Piltover. And fucking mocking the Kiramman heir when he was about to jail besides showing he strenght carrying crazy heavy metal handcuffs and BREAKING them on the trial infront of A LOT of people of Piltover whe he said he wanted to HIDE his strenght. Well, It could be understand as a menace to make them know to not fuck with Zaun while he was out but senseless shit anyways.

Allsmith Spiderman in Arcane

Allsmith Spiderman in Arcane

Video Games · SoyNiir

Natsujan
Natsujan
1 months ago
Commented

Well for me the spider powers and intelligence for crafting were enough. Maybe apprentice himself or steal a bit of hextech knowledge from Heim, to then make himself gadgets or a magical spidersuit. The symbiote and Adaption were really just too much. At most, he could manifest more spider powers like bioelectricity, camouflage, poison stingers, pheromone creation (like the lasso spider that mimics the pheromones of some moths, then swings it around like a lasso until it hits the moth capturing it,...), but that will already make him quite strong. But I did hope you would continue this, so welcome back!

A: The reason would be the entire plot I made. I never intended to do an Overpowered (broken) character from the start, I mean: 1) Spider Powers. 2) A system. 3) A symbiont 4) Being able to repare weapons, build guns and make stuff like gaunlets, he's smart but c'mon, his background is that his uncle teached him some about blacksmith, don't go crazy magically making weapons. 5) And here's the last straw, he got adaptability. You might think: 'Welp, that's okay.' And I would think the same if it only came for battles or something but I made that he could make his OWN HABILITIES by himself, example: 'Oh no! Niko(MC) is drowning!' [Bzz, System activated, the Host is facing an horrible situation, the hability 'Adaptability' is reacting. The hability 'Breath Under Water' has been developed] like WTFFFF was I writing, the sainted plot armor. And all this shit for 20 chaps straight, could you believe it?

Allsmith Spiderman in Arcane

Allsmith Spiderman in Arcane

Video Games · SoyNiir

Natsujan
Natsujan
2 months ago
Commented

Does this include an original option? xD Imma create my own divinity to rule over xD

**"WHETHER GOD OR MAN, TITAN OR BEAST, CYCLOPS OR DEMON. CHOOSE!"**

Reborn As Hades In Olympus

Reborn As Hades In Olympus

Fantasy · FantasyLord

Natsujan
Natsujan
3 months ago
Replied to Santy_Melay

I think it was written by ChatGPT. When I usually have it give me inspiration for how to start a part, it usually is way too poetic like this, with information being repeated for no appearent reason. So yeah, this is AI generated without much editing.

Natsujan
Natsujan
3 months ago
Replied to Naruto_Uzumaki_00

Do 't ask questions you don't want answers to...

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"Now you'll be reborn as Inuzuka Kiba. Your 3 wish have all been granted. Take care young man and enjoy your second life." Elsa said.

Shinobi Fenrir

Shinobi Fenrir

Action · Lain_Walker

Natsujan
Natsujan
3 months ago
Replied to UthredofBebbanburg

He probably will only raise them as Marquises in rank only and only give them big enough fiefs when he has enough land that needs to be managed by subordinates.

"I suggest you think about the Coats of Arms of your Noble Houses and choose a surname from the list I have prepared, Marquises" Joseph said as he saw the surprised looks on Oliver and Thelonius' faces, who had not expected such a reward.

I'm Lord Farquaad....Damn it!

I'm Lord Farquaad....Damn it!

Movies · PowerMan579

Natsujan
Natsujan
3 months ago
Replied to Rycork

Um, he didn't throw the wolf? The wolf got thirsty and went for a drink, but it felt like shit and with the weight of the stones, fell in and drowned.

The Woodsman or The Huntsman, a man who was responsible for opening the belly of the Big Bad Wolf in the story of Little Red Riding Hood, someone essential to saving her and her grandmother from the wolf that had pulled a Nikocado Avocado and swallowed them both.

I'm Lord Farquaad....Damn it!

I'm Lord Farquaad....Damn it!

Movies · PowerMan579

Natsujan
Natsujan
3 months ago
Replied to UthredofBebbanburg

He said work harder, not faster.

Meanwhile, the men who were hired to develop all of Duloc also began to work harder, as Joseph began to pay them more, which caused their motivation to exceed 150%.

I'm Lord Farquaad....Damn it!

I'm Lord Farquaad....Damn it!

Movies · PowerMan579

Natsujan
Natsujan
3 months ago
Replied to oppaidaisuke_69

True, but you need a cassus belli or justification. if you attack willy nilly or even without a war declaration (blitzkrieg), you will lose a lot of standing with the other nobles, which could cause a coalition to put you in your 'place'.

"My Lord, it's too early to point the finger at anyone, but if I had to bet, it would probably be the Principality, as this territory has been in economic trouble lately caused by Prince Galius, who has been spending a lot lately to increase his Army and has been in some conflicts with the Duchies... as for the Duchies, their financial situation is good and they can deal with the Principality without any problems, besides we have several merchants and businesses there" Oliver said as he placed a hand on his chin, thinking deeply about the situation.

I'm Lord Farquaad....Damn it!

I'm Lord Farquaad....Damn it!

Movies · PowerMan579

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    Summoner of Strawhats

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    51 Chs 2.4k คอลเลกชัน

  • One piece of Runeterra original

    One piece of Runeterra

    Fantasy ROMANCE ADVENTURE COMEDY HAREM VIDEOGAME ONEPIECE

    Main character accidentally steps into a anomaly, being flinged into the cracks of the multiverses. He is escorted into the world of One piece but with a few wishes. All copyrights of the characters are towards their original authors.

    5 Chs 65 คอลเลกชัน

  • Isolation eden original

    Isolation eden

    Fantasy

    Dan finaly bought the new CDVR headset especially made for the newest mysterious game released with it. A very interactive world full of adventures, wars and competition, free to be discovered without the danger of PRO and P2W players. Because the characters don't always follow what the player wants. What will happen?

    9 Chs 34 คอลเลกชัน