I look forwRd to every chapter! (Despite my tendency to stockpile chapters to binge read.)
Ohhh a new person takes up the mantle of Meng Hao!!!
"You don't even need to say it, Boss! I've only been waiting for your permission!", the man energetically replied before the order was even given, as Wu Long chuckled, seeing how enthusiastically this guy ran to loot the place.
Eastern · DaoistGreenOnion
Might be best to just say ‘wu longs free hand made’
Wu Long's free of the spear hand made a rotating motion and pushed forward, as ripples of Spiritual Qi spread from it, making ripples in the air and even the fire walls.
Eastern · DaoistGreenOnion
Would she even know about the search party? Besides dont forget she has been losing sleep cause of archer lol
That is, of course, Aria, who now wears a blood-red column-style dress with golden adornments covering her lower body entirely but highlighting her perfect curves; the dress is sleeveless, revealing her delicate shoulders, but has a full neckline, not showing even an inch of her ample bust.
Fantasy · LamenThief
Ah this chapter broyght a smile to my face and made me laugh. Comparing the intital rocky start to the smooth flow of today, i must say you have outdone yourself daoist green onion! Keep ul the good work lol!
“Took off her tights and panties off” you got a redundant “off” here lol
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Eastern · DaoistGreenOnion
Ur welcome.
Ye Ling said as well as she was long feeling like she was floating, and started convulsing right after as her hands clenched on the soft cushions of the sofa.
Eastern · DaoistGreenOnion
Never looked at the title until j saw you author note but i could *FEEL* the tension in the room rising with each word said. So i believe you did a great job!
Might want to specify who is saying what here by using this format: “Bla bla” x said. “Bla bla bla” Y said. Dont just leave it bland, add some descriptions of what they are doing or trying to do as well like this: “Bla bla.” X said while walking ahead. “Bla bla bla” Y said as they chased after X.
"Aaah! This is... incredible! Aaah! Aah! I... I'm coming! Mnh!"
Eastern · DaoistGreenOnion
I have been been reading this series for a while and I am just gonna say it’s really good and I cried a lot
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Fantasy · PancakesWitch