The first 12 chapters have been updated if you want to reread them. I removed most of the "with the intellect of Steven Haking" lines. Let me know what you think and if there is anything else that needs changing!
But its not his real appearance then. Apocalypse revels in his natural mutant state with no need to hide it since he believes mutants will be the next evolution.
Notes for the reader: Apocalypse takes a different approach than the original comics in dealing with Rama-Tut (which will happen in a later chapter) and the Ka stone since he fused with Steven Hakings knowledge of Marvel Comics so I apologize to all readers expecting the book to mirror the comics. The problem is Apocalypse in the comics simps over a normal girl named Nephri which I cannot allow to happen to my version of Apocalypse. She is all for Apocalypse until he uncovers his face causing her to recoil in horror. Apocalypse's love interests here will look beyond skin deep shallowness and fall in love with the existential terror known as Apocalypse.
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There are many versions of Kang across the multiverse. There is even a council of them.
With a final glance at Baal's lifeless form, Apocalypse turned and began his journey. His steps were steady, filled with purpose, as he moved toward his destiny—a confrontation with Rama-Tut, the man who would one day be known as Kang the Conqueror.
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He turned him into a humanoid rock. That comes with benefits like immortality because rocks don't age but side effects like loss of fertility since he is well a rock.
"You are now immortal, Ozymandias," Apocalypse said, his voice steady. "You will serve as my vizier for millennia. Your lifespan is extended, your power increased—but your ability to challenge me, to leave any heirs, is removed. You exist only to serve."
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She gets introduced in chapter 30 in the next arc. It is an epic encounter. Please wait 11 days dear reader!
Yea Stephen Hakings should have DC knowledge just because he is generally knowledgeable of comic lore
I repeat some things in the first 12 chapters which I do a lot less later on since I now edit for it. I plan this week on going and correcting the first 12 chapters, if you feel like it you can reread it then and tell me what you think.
It's convoluted. I think what I am gonna go with is that when Steven Haking's soul crossed into this universe a new timeline opened up from the main one and is independent from others. People from the original timeline like the fantastic four can visit the past and meet our Apocalypse but they are headed for a slightly different future. This is my current thought process but hasn't been placed in the story so it is subject to change. No one like the TVA showed up to stop him or reset his memories when a new time branch opened up. I would appreciate readers thoughts on this.
Ah yes, the dreaded harem. To all those anti-harem people out there, the harem only plays a minor role in the novel. It has a harem, but is not a harem fanfic so don't worry. It has one mostly because it is a historical fantasy and ancient men of power had such things.
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original Marvel: Apocalypse
The novel "Marvel: Apocalypse" chronicles the epic journey of En Sabah Nur, later known as Apocalypse, a being of immense power and intellect. Over 5,000 years of history, Marvel's Apocalypse wages relentless conquest across the world, from ancient Egypt to modern times. Believing in "survival of the fittest", he manipulates and topples nations— Egypt, Okkara, K’un-Lun, and beyond—ruling as a godlike figure. Alongside his physical and mutant power, Apocalypse masters ancient magic, learning from sorcerers and mystic principalities alike, further increasing his dominance. By blending war, magic, and manipulation, Apocalypse shapes human history in his quest for ultimate power and immortality. Throughout the story, themes of power, identity, and evolution are central, as Apocalypse not only aims to rule but to redefine the destiny of the universe itself. Notes for the Readers - First things first, YES, English is my native language but actually not really, my first language was German but I came to the United States when I was eight so English is my BEST language. Second thing to note is that you do not have to be a Marvel comics reader to enjoy this, I REPEAT you don’t have to read Marvel comics to read this. I will do my best to explain everything as it comes along. I don't own any of the Marvel ideas that is instead Disney. If there is anything I missed or you do not understand in the story, post a comment. Multiple family members of mine are not Marvel fans but read this. The novel eventually will be about the God Emperor of the nation Okkara who as we know is Apocalypse (shout out to my Warhammer 40k fans!). The Egypt arc where he is “God-King” will be shorter and introduce Apocalypse which is then followed by one more arc, and finally he becomes the emperor of Okkara. This is where the kingdom building comes in, not so much in the Egypt arc. (As a side note, an Egyptian kingdom building novel would be cool.) After that he will improve Okkaran society and conquer various interest groups/peoples/nations around the world. He won’t conquer earth until after the third celestial host (2000AD). My main reason is not to mess up the timeline of the comics but also because the Celestials tell him to stay put during the second host along with the gods in 1000 AD, mutants have yet to rise in the general populace, and Gaia still has faith in humanity which she loses in the 21st century bringing the return of the Elder Gods to wipe out humanity (pollution has real consequences guys). Lastly, writing is freaking hard so support me and other writers. It is a lot harder than I realized I will be the first to admit, but I learned I do love this more than reading so I hope you enjoy my content. I publish 15 chapters ahead on Pátreon; the URL is https://www.pátreon.com/Fat_Immortal just change the “a” with a funny accent to a normal one.29 Chs 730 คอลเลกชัน
I am back! Sorry about disappearing. I suffer from depression, severe anxiety, adhd, and bipolar disorder so my mental health is not always the best and I have been suffering from it this past week but I am now back and ready for action!
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