Young Justice: Vampire

LV 10

Wanderley_Sobral

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LV 10

Irebornintheboys

it's much too pompous, sentences are repeated, and the mc doesn't have a clear objective, there are also things that are wrong, we don't know when they were, is it the creation of the 'team ? surely not since raven, powergirl, zatara are there but this is not explained at any time. Batman's trust in a stranger who is looking to be recruited is weird too.

LV 2

God_Is_Blind

It is not worth reading a novel in which they ask for stones to get a new chapter. It's a waste of time, no matter how good it is. Each one decides whether to read it or not, but that is my honest opinion.

LV 4

Cameron_Henderson_0639

honestly the author writes the description of the scenes amazingly but it feels like the author is just going on a line and he keeps jumping across it if that makes sense its like he'll write a great description of one scene and the next is just skipped like he'll get Descriptive with the layout of the scene but when it comes to character development he just rushes it I mean after chapter one he skips the mc going out and getting batmans attention and his more unique powers that he already knows about but just came out of know where also the fact that somehow he knows how to defuse a bomb with no explanation he make the world an au but despite having meta knowledge the mc doesn't react even a little bit to it so I'm short the author is great at designing the in the moment scene but not the character development.

Debo decir que esta historia es buena, no tengo casi ninguna queja salvo por el hecho de que a veces se repite el texto en la historia, fuera de eso en general es bastante buena y descriptiva.

LV 4

Smut_reader0

I like it hope you keep updating it has really good potential 😁👍

LV 4

Ques21

Pretty good I hope the story keeps going

LV 4

LastGod

i gave it a fair shake but.. With the long winded convoluted and esoteric description of everything from gotham to mount justice to how hes feeling to what hes seeing. This fic is 91% description 9% plot and character growth. then when we finally get into the plot and he joins young justice. it starts getting good. then it get bad again when u start having them call him "family" or "brother" out of no were. its a conclusion to the greavance of the team that come off unearned on both sides. He didnt earn forgivness and the team didnt either.