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What would you do if you got transported into the body of someone in your favorite anime? Well, it doesn't matter because without skills, knowledge, or even memories, you can only hope that nobody discovers your secret, especially when you are the most important person in the village. Hiruzen SI after the Nine-Tails attack. Nerfed Gamer system included.
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This fanfic is worth reading, the fresh idea amazed me every time i read this one. Read it guys, it is absolutely one of the best fanfic in this time. I hope the author can finish it until the end
That was the best Web novel Fanfiction I read this month, period. it was so captivating I burned my tongue while eating, good job. this is a great new idea which have never been introduced before, I applaud it 👏, well done and keep it up
It's a very good fanfic, I hope you continue to write this book.ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
Writing quality is good, The premise is also really great as well as the character. They all feel like og and Mc is making really good development.
I hope this Hiruzen is 100% of the original, with the exception of the skills. In fact Hiruzen is so incompetent, Danzo so crazy and Itachi so blind that if it weren't for the script Konoha would have been eliminated with absolute certainty after the massacre of the Uchiha clan. The argument is very simple and logical: remember the succession of public displays of weakness and massive losses after Sakumo's suicide, the third war, the Hyuuga incident, and the massacre caused by the Kyuubi with the death of Minato and Kushina, now add the Uchiha massacre and Konoha is so weak that Iwa or Kumo can destroy it. And then comes the second point, most of these losses were caused without any of the other major nations losing anything or losing something insignificant (Hyuuga case). Because of minor things nations invade others in the real world, Kishimoto created a volcano in the script in favor of Konoha and even put some logic into this collective attitude so bizarre that the story involving the Uchiha.
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This fic is too good to just read and ignored it,so here's my review!. Wrinting quaility is well written.. or maybe I just have poor english. The plot also is Outstanding, I can't compare it with any fanfiction because this fanfic is different from other. In conclusion ..Good fanfic! Deserve to be praise! sorry for my bad english
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Yess I need more. The premise has me hooked and I'm already drawn in by the first chapter. Absolutely reading this.
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1 year and 34 chapters in, i can say with confidence this is the best 3rd hokage insert fanfic you will read. its a mix of comedy, misunderstanding, grief, learning, character growth. looking at naruto world from perspective of person who cares of human lives and reactions from people around. its quite good so give it a try. my only bad point is that release rate is very slow. ive been here since chapter 1 release, its a pain to not know what happens next.
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I feel disappointed every time I see that I am close to reaching the last updated chapters. This novel is a masterpiece, one of the best things I have read about Naruto anime. I hope that it will not be dropped in the future.(English not my first language)
This one gave me that 'cold watermelon in the summer' feeling. Turns out there are some concepts that hasn't been milked to death by the fanfic-mass-production machine.
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So far it is pretty good we just neeeeeeed moreeeeeeeee!......................................................................................................
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The start of this fanfic is fantastic. The writing and everything is great. There's just one thing I found really annoying. As hiruzen, he is a super genius with really strong physical abilities, chakra levels and chakra control, in addition to that, he has a system. But even with all that, up to chapter 33 he hasn't gotten stronger than genin-chunin. This story is all about talk-no jutsh and pretending to be strong to wind gihts,and lots of luck as well. It's done splendidly but after 33 chapters... he needd to have some kind of ability that can prove that he is hokage level. He only had one such moment in the whole story, where he got drunken fist as a reward and got drunk and beat up a jonin easily, but that's it. except for that, the story si really good. this would easily become a really popular story if the author didn't have such a slow release.
This is goooooood Hiruzen isn’t just randomly omnipotent all of a sudden and he actually works to make changes and improvements. A fresh read fr keep it up