Why Can't You Give Love A Chance

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MARSH5MALLOW

Woaw, i like this novel though it's not that a part of my genre. The characters are so easily framed in my imagination and the writing is fluent. I would highly recommend this novel

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DaoistMMzDIR

Waaw! What an impressive story, I really loved it, keep it up, so excited to read more🥺♥♥🥺♥

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Ole1

Enjoying the story so far. The fl is kind, assertive and respectful. She’ s a breath of fresh air. I hope to read more about her endeavours

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Jin_moon

Your novel looks great so far, writing quality and character design are almost perfect, just maybe increase the number of chapters you release in a week...

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Blessing_Okosi

This is a thrilling tale 😄😄😄 I'm enjoying the story so far. Thank you so much for the story. I hope many see it and read. I really recommend it

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WuNiang

This is a light read, but at the same time very emotionally challenging. This way of writing feels new to me. But it is very easy to understand, like seeing a scene in a movie. Characterization is very detailed, and each has its own growth. I can't wait for the next update...😊

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PugeEcho

this book seems to capture a relatable and emotionally charged scenario involving Ummi's unrequited affection for Omar. The theme of unrequited love and the internal struggle that Ummi faces as she admires Omar from afar is a common and timeless element in many stories. The dynamic between Ummi, Omar, and Leila sets the stage for potential conflicts, character development, and exploration of themes such as self-discovery, rivalry, and personal growth.Overall, this book has the potential to engage readers' emotions and curiosity, encouraging them to delve deeper into the characters' lives and relationships. It could be interesting to see how the story develops and how Ummi's feelings might evolve over time. Keep it up Author.!

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HouseOfLee

This needs more recognition, you’re very talented, I can’t wait to see more of your amazing writing, I’m invested!

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useduolingo

Alright I'll admit it script formatting is easier to read than novel formatting this is a comfortable read and a pleasant change of pace from the usual

The writing style is quite interesting and getting to read some parts in script format rather than the traditional novel storytelling format feels like a fresh change and helps makes the story fastpaced. Hoping for more chapters!

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Narcissistic_Tiger

This novel is well written and grabs the attention of it's readers, I really enjoyed the chapters I've read. This is great work.

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Arip_Purnomo

Wow, this novel is neatly written so it's a pleasure to read. More chapters please,👍

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K1ngRox1E

I like the author's writing style. It's really good. Well done author.

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Prince_charming57

Interesting world background and engaging characters, this book deserves more recognition.

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Sereinchoo

For the blurb - you can make it an open question like. It would make the blurb sounds more interesting. Ummi contended herself with admiring him from a distance until... > Until she wasn't, until she didn't or something happened and pull them together etc. Overall I do quite enjoyed it, there are areas to be improved but it's not a big of a deal, the story itself was good. Great job author!

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Little_North_Star

The book has everything i love it..keep it up

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Emax224

Giving this book a 5 stars rating. The plot and character design is awesome and i would love to keep on reading. Good job author

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burntwallflower

This novel takes a unique approach, almost like a screenplay in the beginning. The way the narrative changed from third-person to a personal perspective was disorienting at first but as I read through, I discovered a very emotional journey that a lot of people will be able to relate to. This deserves more attention.

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Ile_Isabella

Well, the plot looks nice and looking past the few errors, I'd say it's a good book and I recommend it. Keep up the good work, author. Hope for more improvement in the future .