When The Moon Calls

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Solus

First thing I would like to say. READ THE BOOK!! Personally love werewolves and I would always pick them over vampires but with that being said let's get onto the review. MINOR SPOILERS UP TO CHAPTER 22. Skip if you have not reached this chapter. Will update with further release! GRAMMAR So far the grammar is good besides the occasional mispelling. Though I personally feel that some sentences could be more descriptive. The flow feels good but at times the transitioning during coversations feel awkward. This can easily be edited though so not much to worry about. WORLD BUILDING This one was slightly concerning at first but I started to understand as I read further into the chapters. Instead of a huge infodump the world is gradually intertwined with the story telling. CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT So far the main character does seem level headed but at times the decisions he makes are quite rash. With both of his lives I would have assumed that he would be a tad bit smarter but I guess I can chalk that up to his werewolf side affecting him. The inductions of members into his pack or the sudden allowance of different packs seemed very rush is a perfect example. RATE OF RELEASE Seems to be reasonable but I won't lie. MOAR PLEASE lmfao!! That being said I may not be the most suitible candidate but I would like to offer my services to be your editor. If you would like you could bounce ideas off of me and I could give advice but I would love to see what you envision and rather not be spoiled. Thanks for reading the block of text!

LV 6

sleepteddy

Hi everyone, as the Author of this story I give myself a 4.0 rating. I love my story. I want to write a good werewolf story. I want it to be interesting. Ah and I want it to become a TV Show (starts drooling) It seems that I want a lot of things. I know that my english isn't great, and I don't mind to be criticised because of it, it would be the truth. That's why I won't give myself a 5 Star Rating. I hope you enjoy the story.

LV 12

fosho

I just happened to read this novel as a filler while I waited for my regular ones to release new chapters. I was pleasantly surprised with how well written the story was and how easy it was to get wrapped up in it. This has become one of my favorites over night my only complaint is their isn't enough chapters out

LV 15

scs070896

This story is great so far. I grew tired of the monotonous fanfics or cultivation stories that are thrown everywhere on this site. This story is done really well and if the author keeps throwing out chapters like these I’ll keep voting for them.

LV 5

Ruan_Sueidyson

The pack must be much larger to fight against the position of vampires in the world. Read the series of books Alpha and Omega ... I think it would help a lot to take some inspiration from there

LV 11

Seer_

The story is interesting, a boy tortured than reincarnated to another world of fantasies with an ability to transform, writing should be focused more, but the progression of the story is a great start. And the area setting of the character should be in more details, just a few chapters with infinite possibilities, there are only 6 chapters, as the future chapters have more potential, it will just get more interesting. Be optimistic, and enjoy your way of writing your story, as there are no rules of how much words you put in each chapter. Great Novel, may the best of luck be with you.

LV 11

LongsonFullmetal

Werewolves? Count me in. I just started reading, and i will change this review later on in case it doesnt fullfill my expectations (which i doubt). Im actually really looking forward to this read :D

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igniziouz

Really would have loved the initial phase of MC's life, rather than directly jumping in a pre setup pack. Anyways the story has a fantastic pase where no chapter is filter. Keep up the good work.

LV 15

Elyon

I feel honored to give you the final review to give your novel a star rating. The story is very engaging and it hooked me up. I want to see more action in the future so make sure to keep those chapters rolling!

LV 12

Lilakiralylany

i love this! I realy hope that the story will countinou this good way :D in the starting chapters i have this **** wolf feeling but the story went an another way :D i love werewolfs and i like your characters .I hope you will update often . I just found this today but i read all available chapters :D I recommend this novel everybody who want a addictive fantasy strory with strong characters

LV 4

PotatoesAreAwesome

I will give you a full five star, I don't care this is great! Awesome, the best novel I read in my entire life!!! And I am not exaggerating it, this novel is made for me but sadly I don't have any PSs left so I can't give it to you. :( Great novel

LV 4

sagaaaa

This story is sublime, it has some really good Cliffhangers, the type which give you pleasure and anticipation, not frustration. Just saying... I fucking luuuuuuuuuv dis. May the Dark Gods of Inferno watch over you.

LV 4

sagaaaa

This **** is addictive. 5 stars to the author, his story is well worth them. At least for now. May the Dark Gods of Inferno watch over you all

LV 11

susjul

Its look like this story is quite interesting but no I must restrained from reading s new one for the time being. 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁

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Paula_Garcia_1040

Genial 😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄

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Drifting_Clouds

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LV 12

strangers23

Love it..please continue on writing the chapter..dont stop ..im starting to like the plot..💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂