War of the Two Kinds

Actual Good Plot : Yes, multi stranded story between two characters within their own sets. Detailed story : 15k+ words and counting. Each action and movement and every emotional change is introduced and detailed. "Fuck" - 10+ and counting "Bitch" - 5+ and counting Being British - Absolutely Stereotypic - Somewhat realistically yes. Good representation in character design: Yes, very realistic but also exaggerated for a comedic effect. Effective in realism: Definetly, I find this possible to happen. The slow extinction of humans causing their own and the environment. Naming Characters in design - 50/50 [Their names fit their character according to origin and definition but noble and rare names make it harder to know if its used nowadays.]

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Jay_Blu

The novel has quite a unique setting where the characters are living in a post-modern and perhaps post-apocalyptic world. The amount of suspense and action created in the prologue is very appealing as well. Character design is also well done. The only hindrance to this novel are the bits of grammatical errors, but this novel is overall high-quality.

An incredible story on a weak to strong character that not only focuses on two individuals, yes two . But also relies heavily on lore based interactions among other characters and individuals for the remaining story. With 25 chapters and a completed Arc, this book is promising and gives a refreshing sense of new might. The main female lead of this book is kind and honest yet also brave and a little tipsy in curiousity here and there. She just like the male character have her flaws, non spoiler but she is just as strong as the male lead even if shes in another pathway of time. The male lead in the other hand, well, the younger version is rather reckless and doesn't really follow order much. From reading through and amalysing the works, he seems to act a little smart when doing something, creatively strong and also implied quite a womaniser. Though, its more of a shared compliment than an actual pervert one usually sees. A rather realistic approach for his ups and downs. He too is quite a good a good chap, over time he learns and matures on the way before the female lead takes over his legacy. Background characters and overall layout is pretty balanced and detailed in observing. The characters are all given a certain stereotype but with a more mingle in a realistic approach. You could have a happy go lucky shorty but instead of having some sort of temper tantrum 24/7, she acts more maturely than any of her older peers but also suffer from some sort of illness that won't be spoiled. Then there is the monotonic edgy kid, but instead of a kid, it's a full grown ***** or young ***** who has to deal with life in a more sophisticated and methodical approach. Also, having some sort of dark background, she has developements of feelings and change in behaviour because of the exposure to good and nice individuals even if her tree doesn't like her for who she is. The consequences are naught and really spelled out correctly. Details in writing is true. Though lacking in grammar, the use of voices, accents, tones and even other languages gives a more sense of diversity in this path and theme of multi-stranded global archetype of character overalls. Kinda realistic with how the modern world works with the use of multiple races working together, typical language barriers and also helpfulness among a person to person. Also due to this theme of a pandemic/apocalypse of sorts , it makes sense one half either tries to help rebuild society while the other side suffer slowly (but with some realism, they try to change with support from modern facilities). I can say if this book gets more love and views, it could be the very next thing. Even if its at the wrong site to be posted due to it being involved with mostly cringe based stereotypical romances and/or "systems". It does have a light to shine on its own. It mixes in with every genre, quite a interesting twist. Its an action, an adventure, a dark comedy, a comedy, a millitary/war flick and all time also a character developement sheet similar to how dungeons and dragons or even rpgs form. Also with a small dash of realism, magic and sci-fi onto it. P.S - Author, thanks for promoting your novel to our server, it was really a good add-on. Take a reading on this, if you prepare the more traditional yet modern detailing approach of novel-based writing. ♥️

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ZeDarkness

I have been using Webnovel for quite some time now and have multiple accounts to venture through my many reading library and I can say from the many I have seen. This one is pretty good. Its writing is similar to literature. Even with only a few chapters up for now, the prologue was enough to prove that you are capable of being a good artist. Keep up the good work youngling. Strike on! 😎

Pretty good! I would have rated this 5 stars for all but due to only being the beginning a so called journey. It would only be at 3 stars for now. Keep up the good work and may god bless you! [img=recommend]

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Stories seems fine. Its between Modern and Magical. Hence why the genre is called Magical Realism. I dont know whats Update Stability but 5 per week seems quite good. Seems 12 chapters per .volume is by norm in current society. I will take a read. + good characters +good skills and definition in writing +interesting two protagonist background (Very rare)

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Aeipathy_02

First the narratives were great and easy to read. The emotions for the characters especially the mc has greatly portrayed to the readers. The world building is also good. Overall this story is indeed a great read and great addition to my collections. Great work author! Greatly recommended to everyone!

Forget it, this book deserves 5 stars. this author is fucking genius madman. Why do I say this? Well he literally has full on stories for side characters and he uses two protagonists in two different worlds, which is both hard to actually mantain but also really bizarre. To be able to keep a constant accuracy, one has to chart every single dot down. Unless this guy is some DnD expert or a literal Psychologist, I don't fucking know. Fucking Einstein.

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Sara_Wilcox

The plot is very intriguing, and I’m enjoying the characters a lot🥰 I don’t normally like these types of books but I HAVE to see how it goes! Great job writer!

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DyaAran

This story is creative, interesting and fresh. The author had planned the world background and the characters in a detailed way. With a strong lead, the story talks about adventure. I loved it!

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Faysal_Ahmed_5058

Pretty good story and clean writing so it attracts reader's eye easily. Good job for making the story so enjoyable. The story has all the perks of a masterpiece.

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The_Celestial_King

An interesting novel. the amount of information was good for imagining the scenes. Good Author keep the good work. ...........................

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pariskatx1

I am completely fascinated by the variety of characters and the sort of multiple stories in one thing going on. Even though we're not solely focused on just one character, we're not loosing the flow of the story to much - which is really good! A very interesting plot and great story so far. Good job Author!

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Mel_Aniv

The start was refreshing with a world built intricately. Having an MC that was courageous, it made me hooked and attached to the Mc. With the talented author, this novel was in good hands.

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Jo_J

First of all, you don't struggle with tenses, style, or grammar. It's your advantage over the rest (non-English speakers), use it well! The storyline keeps the reader’s attention, characters are expressive, dialogues are engaging, descriptions interesting... You're doing great! Wish you endless inspiration and a lot of great ideas!

A pretty decent start from usual eldritch abominations. This story consists kf two protagonist going back and forth from different timelines. Pretty understandable with good uses of map detailing and character design. Realistically works with the magic of this universe, acts more like how most element works nowadays over time. Always as an energy source then slowly succumbs to heavier and more destructive power . Characters are human and/or humanlike with distinct personalities. the character do not have a stereotypic personality which I always like to have. This guy may have used inspiration from his parents, friends and overall experience. Thats what I assume. After all this, I propose this guy a five star.

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JustLetMeSleep

The plot and the characters are good, I like that you started with an eldritch abomination rather than a typical monster, your update speed is pretty stable from what I see which is good, the only thing that rubbed me wrong a bit is some of the words used, I don't know if it was intentional or accidental so I'm just pointing some words out, may of them look unnatural and on some sentences I could feel that it lacked some words, some words are also misused. This is an honest review and I'm not holding back, hope I didn't disappoint.

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ZeDarkness

Aas I see the story progress further and further with more clarity and detail, I can say this author is one of a kind. The story is brilliant, The plot is so realistically good. detailing is perfect and the characters are so lovable, to the point I fell in love with one. I saw his art design on characters, though always changing, the characters really fit the bill of their explanation and biodata! the characters have their on motives and plots, even the side characters. That shows . How much detail is given. With one volume completed with probably 10k words, I can fully say. I am satisfied with reading this book and hope it deserves some love! ❤️

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ZeDarkness

So when will the biography of the Phantom and the other members of Continuum come? If you want, I could donate some money for you to do it. Like a pay-2-work. I still want to know more about the General and Demonia/Damonica character maybe also the other three especially the sniper and Mexican? Maybe also a chapter on the more hidden characters too such as Reina The Childhood Pilot Friend and the rest of the crew too.