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This is the tale of how a villainess became the greatest voyager in a world filled with magic and danger.
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Carolle was killed in an explosion on the MVI Queen Liner crew ship to which she was assigned. She transmigrated to the body of Malaya Venizever Marina, the youngest daughter of the Marina Dukedom of the Empire of Sahaya. And the villainess of the novel Fate of the Stars, which she read.
She accepted her role and awaited the fated graduation ball to get her doom flag. Where she will be exiled, and from there she will be able to go on her new journey and fulfill her dream! In the new world full of unknowns, she aspired to be the greatest voyager in history.
"Who cares about the plot?! When you have a whole new world of unknown! You should explore it!"
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Word count: 1000-2000 words per chapter.
Update Schedule: 4-5 chapters a week on any particular day. It may change in the future or if some unexpected events occur.
Author Notes:
1. English is not my first language, so please tell me if there will be grammar errors.
2. The story might be slow or fast depending on each arc.
3. All constructive criticisms and reviews are welcome!
4. All the best to the story and have fun reading.
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Volume 1: From chapter 1-44
Four Special Chapters: From chapter 45-48
Volume 2: From chapter 49 - Ongoing
I would like to acknowledge my two other friends, @Max for helping me to add more details to the chapters and @Yasi for helping me in editing, the upcoming next chapters for Volume 2 and Volume 3
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Adventurous and action scenes are something fascinates me the most and this is also the thing where I struggle the most while writing. However, the author has done a really great work here. Well designed characters, beautifully explained world background and a really cool writing style! what else we need? guys just go ahead and have a look. I love main character's cool attitude and her sense of humor. She is not like someone to cry over their misery, instead of crying she tends to adapt the new circumstances. Great work author 👍 My best wishes to you
I feel like I've read enough of this story to actually leave a detailed enough review, so attached is my not-so-initial opinion of this story. Writing Quality (5/5): I love how the author says that English is not her first author, but the writing is still very smooth to read and with little grammatical mistakes. I'm that type of reader to literally paragraph comment every little mistake I've observed, and honestly, I haven't had to do that here at all. There are variations in sentence patterns, showing and not telling, and really good descriptions that help me visualize the scene. Not to mention, I LOVE all the little extra scenes. They're literally soooo cute (and still help me understand the world/characters more). Stability of Updates (5/5) Story Development (5/5): It was honestly kind of surprising how there wasn't a single chapter that didn't have some form of action. It's what I expect of an adventure book but at the same time, one of the few books I found here that actually lives up to that expectation. Plus, at the same time, I don't really find it rushed, and everything happens at just the right pace. Character Design (5/5): Finally a "villainous" who doesn't try to somehow just become the FL of the story. Like bless, there's finally someone here with actually human reactions and logic??? Also, I really like the dynamics between Malaya and her family ^-^ The dialogue and the way they speak really give each of them some depth. World Background (5/5): It's definitely really clear that there was thought put into constructing this world. Special shoutout to all the magic levels. I read the glossary or the auxiliary chapters afterwards, and I was suddenly like omi this is geniusssss All in all a great read that lives up to it's name. There's no shady and forced romance, and Malaya really is the definition of rewriting your own future. I added the story to my library, and I think it's there to stay :D
It's a great story. A girl from earth get reincarnated in another novel world (isekai transmigration). She wakes up in the body of a side child villainess. But does it matter to her? No, her dream is to see the world. This world has magic, better for her. The plot of original novel has little to no meaning for her but she might just save the villain.(he is good looking by the way!). Let's see her journey to be the greatest voyage. Writing Quality - It's great, there are really few to no grammatical errors. No crutch words are used. Story development - It's fast paced in the arc but it might change with the importance of the arc. The novel has a great mystery factor to it. Character Design - There are some great characters, mc herself she is mysterious, unexpectedly funny and has eyes for her goal while being nice to those by her side. There are also some character I am interested in like vivan, villain guy. world background - Author had taken quite effort in world building. I quite like the idea of having lifa, etc. Will I recommend this story? Yeah, i will. This story has great potential. The magic elements, fighting scens are great in story. I will be looking forward to future chapter. keep up great work author ☺️👍.
I'll began with the author writing quality. I can say that it's good, there were sentences that I found a bit hard to understand, which I think can be fix by just rewording the sentences. Transition is good. As for grammar issues, I'm not really good either *cry cry, but I think that there were a few words that can be replace with a different word, I mean words that have the same definition, but just a different way of saying it. In regard to character design and story development, I'll think that the author did a great job on describing the characters. Especially, the villain, ahem, kind of make me think of those hot anime guy, hehe. Refocusing back to what I say about the describing the characters, yes, the author was good at trying to make her mysterious by wearing a hood. Makes me wonder how beautiful she is. As for her companion, it's a love and hate thing. I don't why, but I can't stand Dorris. Somehow, I imagine her as an annoying little girl. Author, why did you make me think of my little sister? Lol.....Moving on to the story background, the author has provide a glossary of her story world! Excellent! It may be a bit inconvenience to go back and forth when reading a part in the story that made you confuse where you have to go back and search for the meaning behind it, but hey, I'm not complaining. And finally, for story development and updates, the author did say in the synopsis that new chapters depend on the length of each arc. Which is good for eager reader to understand that they need to wait patiently. And last but not least, the story development. From the beginning to the latest chapter, the main action, or dream of the main character haven't happen yet, to be the best voyager! It look like the author is still building up to the point the main character sets on her journey. So as a last parting words of encouragement I wish the best for Malaya and the author herself. Great job, and keep up the great work!
Great! This was an impressive story, I love how the action and the characters are well built in every scene. The descriptive words and dialogues guides you through the world with great fluidity, and, at the same time, it is certainly entertaining. I really wish there were more chapters because I am curious on how this Great Voyager will turn out to be. I am liking her cool personality. Grammars and writing quality is top-notch too. Goodness! Please update more... It really left me hanging there... 😊😊
I am happy to know that I am a top Fan of this novel. I started reading this novel when the author released it’s first ten chapters. Then and there I won’t skip a day without checking and reading new updates of the book. Got hooked of the story. A break for mostly romance books that I ‘m following. Strong Lead... Magical .. Thanks Malaya! Proud to be a top fan. Thanks to the author. Happy Reading to all.
I think I just found my new favorite book! I'm in love with your story telling and most of all, Malaya 😻 I can't wait to read more of this! ♡
It seems like all writers here on webnovel are fantastic at writing fantasy novels, something I suck at. Your characters are unique and well explained. I love the cliffhangers that make you want to read more. Your writing style is also fun to read.
That cliffhanger! Haha anyways. The review, as I have seen till your latest chap 6, I still saw something to be cleanse like typos. Grammar was better than mine by the way. Details were good and very vivid. Something that I can see in the ranker novels and published ones. Power system and world building was majestic. I want to see more in action! hehe good 👍. The plot is moving and mysteries will be all revealed in due time. I can see it as an english movie but not having an anime feels for me ✌️. It was suited in that class for me if I must say haha 😂 Either ways. Characters are unpredictable and not robotic, they have their unique dialogues and were not card board cut outs like mine 😂 All in all, refreshing! Story plot was something we will see in the future. Many clues were put in the story and I hope it captivates the readers. It was like watching a movie for free in a cinema 😆 Thanks for the ride! I enjoyed it! Hope you are in mine too! 😁
A great and worthwhile read! I added this to my library and hopes for more. I am no professional writer myself but in comparison to those books written by known authors, I can say this one is almost on the same level as those. The construction of words for narration and dialogues are very creative, making them easy to comprehend and entertaining to read at the same time. Action scenes were executed well through writing too. The world background was built and explained thoroughly, I see no flaw with that so far. I am loving the MC as much as I love her story, her attitude and everything. After all the encounters she had on her new life, her ultimate dream still stands firm on her heart. This novel is great, all about it is, I am looking forward to the progress and development of the plot. Keep it up!
Here are my honest thoughts about this novel based from what I read so far, World Building: I do really like the concept of worldbuilding in this novel. It give a sense of Sci-Fi or futuristic with a mix of an alien race to make it more exciting to read. The lore in this story is also explained quite well. However, I suggest to give detailed, vivid imagery, and even the showing to make the worldbuilding more fun to read. Character: To be honest, I do really like the character so far especially on their appearance or personality. They are all distinct especially with the main character and I do believe the author will give the side character development since from the early chapter, you show Vivian which is the side character who her own chapter before she escaped with the help of the main characters. I also like how the author describes the character appearances especially on their eyes appearance or even the general one. Overall, that's all I have to say about this novel and I do believe it have a good potential. Keep up the good work!!
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Just added to my library! Sometimes the words can be confusing but its only the beginning, its already interesting. I love the fact that villainess is friends with the FL though
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woah i can't explain it, it's really different from the other stories that i've read, it's really great, i might recommend this to my friends. i'll keep waiting for the next chaps.
Extensive fantasy world - check. Deep and realistic characters - check. Intense, fast-paced action with occasional, perfect comedy - check. Yeah, there really isn't much to complain about. A few grammatical errors here and there but that's because the author's first language isn't English, so it's understandable. Besides, it doesn't affect the story's quality in any way. Seriously, give this a try.
An absolute banger in this genre ,gives nice character interactions at the same time having an adventurous and free spirited vibe. Keep it up and best of luck
It is not every day you read this kind of novel, the plot is really unique. Interesting plot, engaging dialogues and deep characters from the few chapters I have read. I can't wait to dig in. Nice one.
The descriptive words is enough to be hooked. On the first few chapters, the author put a glossary so the readers won't be confused. The glossary and its system tier is great. especially the terminologies.
The writing style is well made. Overall, this book has high potential given the unusual set up as a villanness for the MC. If this book can commit to a consistency of update, then it will surely make big. Added it to Library. Good luck!
I have added this book to my library! The story has just started and I have already enjoyed the great start. I have find this story .... somehow different to the usual stories I have been reading in webnovel. Card tricks of magician, space voyager, space warrior, migration.... ???? Hmmmm... I am curious to know.... It’s just starting but I feel that I will enjoy my reading as the story progress. I remember when I started reading Webnovel wayback 2018... you can easily identify which story will give you the reading satisfaction you crave for..... but now with the rising of different authors... different plots, varied settings.... Whoaaa , there are so many choices.... Surprisingly, this story is somewhat different. Congrats to the author and I know you can give me more of what I expected and will enjoy it till the end. Have a happy Reading.❤️❤️🙏❤️