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In a world where magic meets the mind's vast expanse, Lucas, reborn as Harry Potter, wields the power of visualization to master his emotions and wandless magic. With a tranquil sea as his mental fortress, he embarks on a journey of self-discovery and magical mastery.
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This is a really solid Harry Potter story. The world is more expanded upon than most other fanfics, and there is an actual world outside of the protagonist. The only real critique I have as of chapter 25 is that dialog between characters and their thoughts feel unnatural. Oftentimes, the same phrases will be repeated the same way. e.g, when Harry talks to the administrators who will decide his future education, they all say the exact same phrases when talking about him. Ramble Underneath I don't really care if authors use AI to help them write, but it can sometimes lead to a limited vocabulary(it might not be AI, and the author could just struggle with convincing dialog). A lot of AI stories use a higher level of vocabulary but don't apply it correctly and ends up making dialog too rigid
I’m enjoying this so far, keep up the good work author and dont stress out i dont want to lose anotjer good story to read from someone dropping it 😊 Thanks so far 😄
This is an absolute gem of a story. This normally what I would expect of trending stories on Royalroad. This has huge potential and as does the writer. Totally worth a read.
This is really well done so far. The first 30 or so chapters were starting a bit weird but after the horcrux influencing him was revealed it made sense. Im liking the fanfic a lot, I hope you keep updating! Thanks
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This is shaping up to be one the pinnacles of hp fanfiction I have ever read. Absolutely love the amount of detail paid to the magic and the Mc’s thought process. Looking forward to more.
For me, the story was a bit annoying at first because it felt perfect except the MC. Magic was reasonably described. The characters were extremely well written, feeling almost three dimensional. The world background seemed rich, moving by itself and with the butterfly effect of the MC. Even so it felt like our main character was a sociopath. Don't get me wrong, I can get behind a character that is selfish, ruthless, or even evil, but it is odd seeing a main character with no connection with the world, actively manipulating everyone around them, and preforming a massacre with no remorse (even if it was in self defense). It was later that we learned that the Horcrux was affecting him and it all made sense. He got rid of it and instantly became better, seeming more genuine. My only real gripe with the story at this point is that the MC is called Lucas instead of Harry. This shows that either the MC, the author, or both still see him as Lucas and not Harry.
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Amazing! I was initially apprehensive, but the meticulous descriptions of the magical arts made this fanfic stand out from countless others. The concept of the vast sea was ingenious, as was Lucas's utilization of it. I can't wait until you finish the fanfic! Good luck🍀
I was sceptical at first, noticing the amount of chapters that revolved around harry/lucas early years of life before Hogwarts, but I was pleasantly surprised this time. The writing quality is very good, the chapters are almost never boring. It gets a little too masturbatory it regard to how people react to the mc's genius, they go too far imo but that's a small complaint. so long as the update schedule is decent this should be a good fanfic.
Keep up the good work I am loving the new Harry Potter and now is the time to see how he maneuvers in wizarding world and its politics. [img=coins][img=update]
Unbelievably well written and thought out story. Never thought I would see the day I would find and read an OP Harry with brains and proper personality and character. This actually reads as 'What if you find yourself in HP world'.
This story is amazing! I'm amazed I didn't stumble upon it before! The grammar and progression is top tier! The character personality and mindset, alongside his actions are all genius! I especially like chapter 46 and how he handled an entire year worth of danger.
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Nice , just binge read it ... Author has shown glimpses of Chinese and middle eastern society .
Incredible work, man! This is honestly quite unlike many HP fanfics I've read; it has quite an original approach to the story while maintaining what we know from canon, plus it doesn't seem to have the tired Dark Lord Dumbledore trope, so there's no bashing or incompetence present here. Despite the story being pretty slow-paced, the story actually flows pretty well, and these pre-canon chapters are actually pretty good for setting up future plots and showcasing the MC's progress with his magic. All in all, it is a very solid fanfic, and I did not expect to see something like it in Webnovel of all places.
Why does author still refer to Harry as Lucas? just change his name to Harry already and stop referring to him as Lucas. I just hope there are some timeskips because I'm tired of reading how a child of 6 years old is killing off long established assassin organizations.