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Helen Bacchus, 35 years old, former CBRN Specialist, movie enthusiast, and the list goes on and on forever... but the thing of interest is that she had just been mashed into paste by a fifteen-ton military transport vehicle. Which was quite a surprise since she was sleeping in her bed... at her home... which was on the third floor of a seven-story tall building.
She lay there, in her bed, with a military transport truck lying upright on top of her. Crushed and helpless, she awaited her death with but one thought in her head... 'Fuck the army!'
Now imagine her surprise when upon opening her bleary eyes, she found herself lying in a World War I-era medical tent with no clue as to what the hell was she doing there. However, upon the sudden appearance of a holographic interface calling itself 'System,' she began to doubt if she had just snorted a crap ton of jolly good white candy powder.
First time writing and English is most certainly not my first language, so forgive any mistake that I make. Also, forgive me for any errors in the storyline, and do comment to have them corrected.
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A shameless review from the author themselves. Well I am quite new to this, so there would definitely be not much quality work here but I would still try my best. Anyways please do tell me about any error that may occur and I would do my best to correct it.
It's good as far as it gets till now. Though are you really going to let a group of three cuties slip from under the MCs hands. Anyways you should definitely tone down on the stats and Blueprint. I think you should try something new like system shop, no pressure from me, just a small suggestion.
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truly an interesting concept and the system is fun enough for my taste. My issue with this novel is that I might know too much about war and history to get immersed in the story. A lot of the battle scenes feel like it's an action flick when it's based during The Great War. Examples being no trench warfare descriptions leaving it feeling like it's a ww2 time period instead. Also small thing for me; and could totally be explained as authors own world stuff, but by the time mark V tanks were introduced the war was basically over and done with. Like within the same month they were deployed the war was won. Just doesnt make much sense to me for the enemy to be doing counter offensives when the end is as close as it is. anyways that's my two cents good job on the novel and good luck.
It's a good novel but the update rate and plot progress is very slow. Plus the story line feels a bit rushed, no in-depth explanation makes for a big problem.
Loving this so far! Very interested to see where this story goes in future chapters!! Can not wait to read more!
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You know it's alright so far but like why doesn't she get the actual weapons and other goodies along with the blueprints so she wouldn't suffer do much she's still only human after all there's a chance she can get the super soldier serum just a thought also Red is dumb like why isn't she dead she's literally just standing there most of the time getting shot at
Gadayum!!! action-packed Yuri novel nothing more to say, nothing more to say, nothing more to say sdfsdfsdfsdfsdfsdfsdfsdfsf sdf sdf sdfsdfsdfsdf
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it's an entertaining, action-packed Yuri Novel!! .............. tho I don't like Duvall but we'll see If I change my mind sdfsdfsdfsd sdf sd fsdf
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The only worthy romance is yuri.Good stuff, I like the setting and progression so far, grammar also good as far as I can tell