Until I Say Your Name

LV 3

NakedApron

Writing quality: no problems I could find Story: it's fast, its easy to understand, and its so far interesting. also, the queen somehow feels like Anakin from the prequel, but tahts just prob me. character: I've only read till ch 5 so I can't really say, but so far the tropes are there with confined princess, prince with ill image, angry stepmom, and love triangle incoming.. What will happen to those tropes, we will surely find out. World background: Kingdoms and courts. summary: 5star

LV 1

Brian_Hanes_117

This story is honestly a masterpiece. I got addicted as soon as I started reading it. It's rare I find a Webnovel story that I enjoy nearly as much as this. The characters are relatable and interesting. The world background is great, the description is good in general. The story development is excellent, the updates are consistent, and the story is top-tier. I like the banter between the characters and how it has a heavy-dialogue focus. The biggest improvement I'd like to see in it is more description of what the environment and characters look like. This is one of those stories where it's tough for me to decide between 4.8 and 5 stars. On one hand, it hits almost all things on the checklist but is missing something. I suppose I'll give it 5 stars this time because what the story missed in description, I got out of some other categories where it went above and beyond my criteria. But I will still say to the writer, please look to add more description in this story. Cheers and I look forward to keep reading it.

LV 2

OneClaudia

THANK YOU ALL FOR GIVING MY BOOK SOME ATTENTION BY REVIEWING, ADDING TO YOUR COLLECTION, COMMENTING AND MORE. I APPRECIATE IT A LOT!!!!!!!!!!!

LV 3

StickyTar

Believe it or not I'm actually a sucker for romance so this was actually a really good read. In the chapters that are out so far the writing quality is great, the character's feel realistic, and I love the atmosphere of the world. The dialogue is also great, keep it up author!

LV 3

002_Yuki_Onna

4.8/5, so that you will work even hard and will keep getting motivated..actually the plot is pretty interesting and before that the title and synopsis it can make anyone curious about this story! Obviously our main lead is super adorable..but I think it could've been a little more descriptive about the surroundings! it's just my opinion overall it's an amazing story! I didn't even realize that I've read till the latest chapter so soon! keep up the great work, and one more thing I'm totally clueless about the ending which is making me alot curious 😅

LV 2

Divas

Overall very nice story. Give it a 5 star as l haven't read a story of a princess(Except childhood stories 😅) before like this. Loving it and l hope you can have a great income with this book.

LV 13

Author_Enigwe

honestly this is a really interesting novel. I love everything about it and wish to read more 😋😎😎😋😉😉😁😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😍😍😍

LV 14

Bloom759

I loved the title, it is quite ominous but suiting. The synopsis grabbed my attention. The struggles that are met my the King and Queen sets readers for a rollercoaster ride. Ps like I said before this reminds me of 'Mr Queen'!

LV 1

Mediocre_author

Overall, fantastic character creation, decent use of punctuation, and a great story! I really enjoyed how unique and carefully crafted each individual character is. Keep at it!

LV 1

pedro_corti

This book have everything you need... awesome work!! keep up the spirit and hope to see more wonderful works from you! The writing was captivating, the characters are believable and I care about them!

LV 10

Tsu_YouMing

This story is good. It has a great pace. Not too rushing or too slow. I like the character setting. The princess is smart and not too naive. She understand her roles and tries her best to fullfill her duty. The King is also to my liking. He is not forcefull and calm in making desicision. There is an air of mystery with romance in this story. Good work!

LV 1

stary_nights

your writing style is compelling and tells a good tale, your story itself is following a good pace and the plot is slowly unravelling, the characters are well written, and over all the book is great i would suggest extending more on the world background though

LV 2

ampihamioj

The story is refreshing and very interesting. I like the characters and the world background, very detailed and fascinating. The grammar was okay for me as well.

LV 4

Marianne_2020

This was really good, I love it I didn't blink an eye throughout. it was interesting and engaging making you flow easily with the characters in all the author did a great job well done

LV 3

JN_Njane

Royal families, kingdoms and nobles have their own kind of flare. The betrayal from those we call allies, the political plays, and the internal feud and threats from within. It just gets me seating on the edge of my seat...looking foward to the future of this book..

LV 11

KAREN_DN

the beginning is so good and it can bring a good mood to be to read the whole story. anyway, I like the cover! since I'm currently writing about fantasy romance also with Prince and Princess and the whole thing, I like it! at least I know how your fantasy romance book goes well and I can learn from you too ^^ keep on writing author, you do write well ^^

LV 1

immortal_shizu322

good story thus far, gotta say that world is also described perfectly keep it up author gonna wait for next update[img=update][img=recommend]

LV 2

iam_adh

I like how in the beginning the mood is set and the character is established. Some parts of it are a bit cliché but the author does well with the writing some parts are a bit confusing and need more description but besides that this story is good.

LV 1

Sjsnwhnxshsh1

This is an absolutely fantastic novel. Honestly, this is THE best webnovel that I have read up to now. Everything is built to perfection. Kudos!!!

LV 4

Bunny_Junnie

Seems interesting! The synopsis can catch anyone's eyes. And author arranged the storyline so well. Great job and great imagination! Keep it up! I am rooting for you.

LV 1

Wizedex

While, I'm not into stories about the rich elites of society (no matter the age), romance, or princes and princesses, this one's honestly pretty good. The flow of the words is very interesting. The plot is pretty well put together and I think I have an idea of how it's going to end.

LV 11

restful_sins

ok first starting off I have to state that this is out of my usual cup of tea. it has a really good use of first person and it is unique in the use of verbal communication it allows each character to have a life of its own and not the same repeated word. I have to say it's an amazing book keep it up.